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Finding Love on the Run Ch. 01

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by Anonymous03/29/12

While it's a good story, the execution and writing leave a lot to be desired, I had trouble following it in a few places. You really need an editor, spelling, grammar and punctuation changes would be a great help. I rated it 3.

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by Anonymous03/29/12

Great Start

Keep going plz :)

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