I really hope you do another chapter or 3. You have plenty of material for flashback scenes if you want them, even without revisiting the rape (the rape-kit at the hospital can be awful, the police interview, etc.). They could help keep the tension up as she continues her journey toward a safer, saner relationship.
You have a nice style, so whatever way you go with Ch. 02 I am looking forward to reading it.
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Anonymous04/19/14
I liked this
I am however, disappointed to see that there is no continuation. It also seemed a bit rushed when it came to the two girls confessing their feelings for one another. I hope to see more at some point, it definitely has potential to be a good series.
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Nice start
My eyes are still leaking from the beginning, but I like where this is headed. Please continue! ~ L
LOVED IT! Please write more!
being in love with her best friend chloe
fantastic first story baileys begining ch 1 . wanting more but a lot longer
loved the writing brilliant ,
The beginning was great, keep going. Cant wait to read chapter two.
More please.
I really hope you do another chapter or 3. You have plenty of material for flashback scenes if you want them, even without revisiting the rape (the rape-kit at the hospital can be awful, the police interview, etc.). They could help keep the tension up as she continues her journey toward a safer, saner relationship.
You have a nice style, so whatever way you go with Ch. 02 I am looking forward to reading it.
I liked this
I am however, disappointed to see that there is no continuation. It also seemed a bit rushed when it came to the two girls confessing their feelings for one another. I hope to see more at some point, it definitely has potential to be a good series.
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