All Comments on 'Keeping Warm: A Sibling Heat'

trips not over lol

Another good one keep it up .Hope there is more to this story !

but got a little bad when they started talking about adding the parents. NEVER add the parents it ALWAYS ruins a story keep it to just the siblings.

Loved this, hope to find it a whole family thing soon! Keep writing

Great story. I'm ready to read about the whole family getting together!

This is amazing and loved it hope more will follow with the family as well

as well as an excellent story. But I have come to expect no less from you.

it was great i got horny over the title

Another great story and hopefully another start to a great series. Looking forward to the next night where he gets her ass maybe. Then move onto the parents.

"Mmmmmm," my sister moaned, before changing the topic abruptly and shockingly. "Would you fuck Mom if the chance offered itself?"

"What was gotten into you?" I asked, shocked by my shy daughter's dirty mouth and crazy question.

what happened to the brother in those 2 lines?

I like that they fell in love with each other as lovers along with the love they had as brother and sister.

Their trip has just started and perhaps they will make their bond as lovers even stronger as the trip continues.

There's still the matter of him fucking their mom, and his sis fucking their dad still on the table and should be dealt with.

Thanks for the great read.

My sister and l had always been close, and she visited me at my flat for a couple of days, when she had an interview for the same college that l was attending. After a nice meal and a few bottles of wine we went to bed in separate rooms. About midnight there was a severe thunderstorm and my sister got scared and asked if she could get into my double-bed with me. She began to be less afraid when l put my arms around her and l could feel her young hard breasts against my chest and l knew that she would be able to feel my hard cock pressing in to her.

Eventually we started fondling each other and kissing and brought each other off by hand, as we were both virgins, and then fell asleep.the following evening l asked my sister did she feel OK about the nighrt before, she said she loved it and could we do it again. This we did every night during her stay, but never actually had intercourse.

To cut a long story short, my sister was accepted at the college and we lived together for 2 years, she went on the pill and we had marvellous sex. When we had both qualified we moved away together to work and we decided to say we were man and wife. We had 3 children together and we still are in love now 50 years later.

...Incest is best, especially brother/sister!

Nice earthly metaphors... Too bad it's a contest story, other wise I would have asked for a chapter 2.

The use of volcano, however, hinted Mary's deeper desire for her brother than Alan's occasional jerk-off fantasy. I think, for a short piece, you wouldn't have had time to built the shift in Alan's feelings.

It was a good offering to Mother Nature :)

Pun intended!

A plausable and well told story.

Thanks for writing and will there be a part 2 in which Alan fucks Mom?

Pete

Ummm ok in one part of the story it said "My shy daughter" i thought it was sister and brother? any good story though

Not bad i cant wait to read more u can call me dragon night

I hope you continue this story. It was really excellent. Great work and very erotic. Hurry, I am sure Mom is waiting her turn.

Hope you plan to tell us about the rest of the week. Very erotic

you know how to arrange words for impact. mom says to share sleeping bags for warmth ... that night i first fucked my sister. boom.

well-written and believable. i especially enjoyed the lampshaded nature-sex metaphors.

keep us hanging here, the rest of the week is sure to be hot! Thanks for a great read.

Great story. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

you guys should totally find a way to have an all family orgy, then post it here

Sometimes more is better, but this was still hot!

Wonderful read. I really enjoyed it. Nice work.

I find your time frame a bit off, because in may most of the higher mountains in Canada still have snow until late in that month. That said he is lucky to have such a hot willing sister.

Man! my dick hardened, my sister is sleeping nearby, her cunt is inviting me, this is my first. I will fuck her now, thanks for your story,

That was awesome. If that was my sister, I would have cum in her mouth, then french kissed her so I could yasye my own cum. After that, I would cum in her pussy and then eat her pussy to taste my cum again. Yummmmmmy!

I think i'm speaking for everyone when i say MOAR :-D the next few days would be great and your incestuous stories are great :-)

this needs more and could have used some more background. continue half a story is worse than no story at all just keep the parents out of it. when it comes to incest it is always THE FEWER THE BETTER.

Love to c more chapters! Fantastic start to a great story! Please keep them coming!

Have you ever considered making videos to post?

I loved your story and thanks to your friends for their assistance with the final result. Mabye you could continue by adding mom and dad in a future adventure, and then later add members of their extended family. Hope to see more in the future.

Submited 3/14/2013

I would love to read more stories about Allen and Mary fucking and trying not to get caught.I think it is the fear of being caught that makes fucking on the sly so special.Like any man I will fuck anytime I have an oppurtunity , but haveing to sneak around is most exciting.I do enjoy reading you,thanks for sharing

Well, sure, what did the boy expect? It's his own baby sister's cute little twat he's got his big stiff prick in. This is a great story, and it shows how family fucking can open up a person's mind. Allen hadn't considered fucking his own mother before, but now that he's fucked his kid sister and blown his brotherly balls up her sweet little cunt, the idea of getting his big prick up his own mother's mommy-hole and shooting his creamy semen up the same cunt he came out of is looking mighty attractive. Mary'd love to get her father to shove his big daddy-dick up between her legs and fill her little coochie with the same sperm that made her. I think this family is set for a great family fuckfest from now on.

Nothing better than sliding a cock into my sister's deliciously wet cunt.

Loved the story. Blew my biggest load and had to read it again as my cock was

still hard and need more relief.

Your writing surly is better than the average writer and I liked your metaphors -- especially the one about the rain "pissing" on you. Had to laugh at that.

Much more acceptable than your other story I reviewed today (less, Mutual Destruction Theorum) true H.L.

A short and sweet incestuous tale. Good Mother Nature stories are hard to come by, so this one's well appreciated. Thank you.

Adding my two cents: I don't think the parents should be included.

Please keep this going need to hear what happenes in the morning. And do they include mom and dad. And if they do is it on the trip or do they wait until they get home.

I was 12 my sister was 11 when we first did it, boy she was hot, soon we watched mom get fucked as well then go do it our selves. mom had a beautiful pussy, my sister asked me the same question, I said yes I would...

...oooook, well the plot and storyline seem fine but the way the author had them talking is killing me!! Nobody talks like that! Heres an example;

"My cock now fully erect, I said, "Yes, Mary. It is sometimes very hard to not check you out. Your breasts are barely ever concealed even when you are wearing sweaters. Your ass seems so perfectly tight and your smile would weaken any man, which it is doing right now.""

....and lets fix it here;

My cock now fully erect, i said, "Yes Mary. It's sometimes really hard not checking you out!

Your big breasts are barely concealed even when you're wearing sweaters. Your ass is perfect and tight and that smile would make any man weak, which it's doing right now."

Much better, reads like a real person would talk!

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Being twenty, my cock didn't even consider shrinking and when my sister finally took my cock out of her oasis of pleasure; she rolled to her side and begged, "Big brother, please fill my oven with your big loaf."""

@@@ ok, the whole lava/volcano analogy was bad enough, but big loaf in the oven? Bleh! Really?! That was horrible! Hahaha! I'd have spewed my coffee if Id been drinking any, lol!

...at least he was quickly on board with being naughty with sis, unlike so many other lamer stories! @@@

I slid beside her and positioned my excited cock behind her. It was dark and the angle awkward and as I pushed forward she gave a slight yelp.

"Wrong hole," she informed me,

@@@ not necessarily sis, we can work on that later! @@@

""What was gotten into you?" I asked, shocked by my shy sister's dirty mouth and crazy question."

@@@ I just dont understand how you can write something and NOT see the huge fuck-up as you type it! 'What was gotten' ?! Lol! @@@

Amazing just amazing you need to write more

Like the story but don't understand American education... If she is 18, surely she should be about to go to college or university, not school. In my country you go to school between the ages of about 4 and 18, and uni. from 18/19 to about 22.

Anyway, enjoyed the characters, although my ideal girl would be around 34B-24-34.

To the previous commenter: Oxford University is a prestigious college. She is going to college.

Brilliant story. Would love for them to take the parents or be a true bi family...

Is there a part 2 to this story yet? I would love to read more as i thoroughly enjoy reading some of your other series's!

Superb story! A 2nd chapter would be nice.

Seems that the biggest story crusher by writers on this site is the habit of using first person references to one another like, "Big brother", "little sister", "Sis", "bro" continuously. It makes the whole conversation sound forced, as if referring to each other this way reinforces the incestuous aspect of the sexual activity. It does the opposite. It actually trashes the experience because any real sibling sex would likely involve NEVER using these terms for one another, simply because they would not want to remind each other of who they are to each other. You could remove every one of these mutual incestuous references, and the story would take on an aspect of real life. Mutual 'genetic attraction' results in an effort to distance themselves from the nature of their relationship. Very few siblings enjoy this taboo because it is taboo. They are simply attracted to the other for any number of reason EXCEPT that it is taboo. I know from experience.

Decent premise, dumb dialogue!

The dialogue was kinda cheesy:/. As for the comments below, denouncing the 'big brother' 'little sister' etc, well that's fine for you, but unlike you and your sister, I'm not ashamed of the fact that I'm having sex with my 'little sister', more to the point, I'm not ashamed of my sister. So we enjoy each other, and while it isn't an every time thing, talking to each other like that makes it a lot more fun at times, not to mention addressing each other like that occasionally in front of others just gets you would up for later with our little secret communication, right in front of friends and family!

I appreciated this story. It's relatively short for your writings, and sometimes that's ok. The story will survive by itself, but the last sentence leaves some of us (like me) yearning for a second chapter. Anyway, I wanted you to also know I appreciate all of the stories that I have read. Thank you for your efforts and putting them on Lit so we can enjoy them.

293. This story was so good! I love the short stories without too much buildup but good hot sex, particularly between siblings. Fucking in a sleeping bag, especially doing 69, is damn near impossible, but the thought of it is hot. Also, the thought of the possible swaps with parents leads to great expectations. Wish I had a sister!

293. Another one that I commented on but didn’t send. I really like sibling sex. Wish I had a sister.

Nussin irstasta siskon pillua paljaalla.

Incest is a amazing

Another excellent tale as told by the Mistress of Silk... and like so many others, the conclusions are left to our own imaginations.