All Comments on 'While You Were Sleeping Ch. 02'

You definitely have left me wanting for more ~ Please don't stop with this story!!!

Enjoyable, but, could you please avoid using the present tense. You are telling of something that has happened, not is happening right now and stories flow better in the past these.

Thanks though

More please!

please, write the next chapter soon. I would love to know more about these two sweet characters!

This is a very good series! I hope you can continue it!

more more more more please. SO GOOD!!!

I really enjoy this story series, Keep going please!!!! You can really drag it out and add some good twists to it!

Please write more soon, it's really good!

Please, please write more! So hot!

More, please!

Keeep on writing I'm getting sooooo horny baby 💋👄

Don't stop now. Keep this story going,but don't let him find out. Maybe have him bring some friends over.... Thnx

please add more! i love how much rougher he was in this chapter!

I really loved your story. Maybe in next chapter she could wake up while he's doing it. I hope you don't take too long to make him find out she's not been sleeping. Also please dont let him bring friends in on this--i would not like that at all. Cant wait for more!

I'm officially addicted to this story, it made me so wet that I could hardly even stand it! Please continue this or I'll most definitely cry.

It's so adorable how desperate Kyle is! I am in love with this story, you must continue!

Would love to read more

Nicely written! Refreshing to read a story with this particular plotline and told from the "sleeping" female POV for a change, as opposed to the guy's POV. Hope the story continues!

Please continue

Kyle is a moron

Shorts no panties, I would at least feel for a reaction. At some point she is as responsible for these actions as Kyle. Andrea make it right, take some control, I think you would enjoy some more control over both problems.

Please make the next chapter this made me so wet great detail and loooove the storyline also i like that u give the reader a chance to imagine the guy the way they want to instead of describing. Please mske more stories like this.

This is awesome. I love that it's from her point of view but that she's still so incredibly passive and can't do anything about it

These stories were absolutely amazing and so hot! Please write more for this series.

They are so good

Moreeee

Please write more I love this story!!!!

More please, I have to know what happens next!

Ok people.. after 5 yrs it's obvious this chick has abandoned her story but it's such a great story line. There must be someone out there that has the feels for this like me except with the talent to write. So I m begging anyone who reads the this to give it a try. Just keep the title similar but slightly different so we can find it. Anyone?

I keep coming back to reread it. Please continue!

Great story! I will add to the growing chorus of voices hoping the series gets a revival!

I love these two stories! Kyle is an asshole (mega asshole) but she should make an honest man of him and properly seduce him, now that she knows she's likely to succeed! Unless, of course, he is strange and only likes sex with women who are borderline unconscious. Then a proper seduction could ruin everything. Well, there's one way to find out, isn't there? Five stars and thanks from me, JB Edwards