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While You Were Sleeping Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by KCMary03/30/12

Very Nice!!!

You definitely have left me wanting for more ~ Please don't stop with this story!!!

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by Anonymous03/30/12

Good, but

Enjoyable, but, could you please avoid using the present tense. You are telling of something that has happened, not is happening right now and stories flow better in the past these.

Thanks though

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by Anonymous03/31/12

More please!

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by Anonymous03/31/12

please more!

please, write the next chapter soon. I would love to know more about these two sweet characters!

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by Anonymous04/08/12

Now I have become addicted!!

This is a very good series! I hope you can continue it!

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by Anonymous04/27/12

MORE

more more more more please. SO GOOD!!!

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by Anonymous05/04/12

I really enjoy this story series, Keep going please!!!! You can really drag it out and add some good twists to it!

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by Anonymous06/01/12

Please write more soon, it's really good!

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by Anonymous06/22/12

Amazing

Please, please write more! So hot!

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by Anonymous10/11/12

Wow....

More, please!

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by StoryTeller200212/01/12

Oh I'm Soo horny!

Keeep on writing I'm getting sooooo horny baby 💋👄

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by Anonymous12/03/12

Don't stop now. Keep this story going,but don't let him find out. Maybe have him bring some friends over.... Thnx

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by Anonymous05/13/13

please add more! i love how much rougher he was in this chapter!

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by Anonymous06/01/13

please write more!!

I really loved your story. Maybe in next chapter she could wake up while he's doing it. I hope you don't take too long to make him find out she's not been sleeping. Also please dont let him bring friends in on this--i would not like that at all. Cant wait for more!

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by bookie712/09/13

more?

I'm officially addicted to this story, it made me so wet that I could hardly even stand it! Please continue this or I'll most definitely cry.

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by Anonymous01/26/14

Love it!!

It's so adorable how desperate Kyle is! I am in love with this story, you must continue!

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by Anonymous06/02/14

Would love to read more

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by Anonymous09/30/14

another chapter please

Nicely written! Refreshing to read a story with this particular plotline and told from the "sleeping" female POV for a change, as opposed to the guy's POV. Hope the story continues!

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by Anonymous10/23/14

love it

Please continue

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by maddict10/30/14

Kyle is a moron
Shorts no panties, I would at least feel for a reaction. At some point she is as responsible for these actions as Kyle. Andrea make it right, take some control, I think you would enjoy some more control over both problems.

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by Anonymous04/17/15

annyone of the best

Please make the next chapter this made me so wet great detail and loooove the storyline also i like that u give the reader a chance to imagine the guy the way they want to instead of describing. Please mske more stories like this.

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by Anonymous03/14/16

Wow

This is awesome. I love that it's from her point of view but that she's still so incredibly passive and can't do anything about it

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by Anonymous09/19/16

Amazing!

These stories were absolutely amazing and so hot! Please write more for this series.
They are so good

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by Anonymous01/28/17

Moreeee

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