You never fail to make me feel good about life, in general, when I read one of your stories. Thanks for being there and please keep writing such wonderful stories. You are truly the best and definitely my most favorite author.
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Anonymous03/28/12
A pleasant tale...
...and well told, but not much in the way of drama or conflict in need of resolution.
but I have to admit that the cool gal with the evil jock, the use of contaminated water for vengeance and the black mailing fat aunt turned down my flame....
I am curious. If these last few stories are from the same person that has posted in the past as DGHear did you have a stroke or something? The last few stories seem like they were written by a 12 year old.
It is always a good day when you find a new story written by one of the true masters. This was definitely another Five Star submission by one of the best there is.
so, this is how nice guys think, huh? i definitely got a sense of character - earnest, honest, kind, easy-going - and it was pretty endearing how he kept using and bringing up that one high school project. the writing style complemented the character, and was easy to read. but i thought the hottest part was when he was flashed and fucked by the housewives. romantic HEAs just don't do a lot for me ... but i do not hold that against you :) thanks for the window into the mind of the incomprehensible (to me) regular guy from a small town who meets the woman of his dreams.
And plenty of real life pain to be shared by all -
The social price of being overweight in this time s far higher than many understand - there was a time when being overweight was a sign of affluence and power. Now it is considered to be in "bad taste", wasteful, irresponsible. Both are wrong - however nowadays we have ways to make people suffer for the things others do not like about them - ah well - people are just plain good by nature RIGT??? - bullshit.
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Great Story!
DG you done yourself proud! Man I love this story. I'm watching for more of your storys as you are such a good writer. Thanks for sharing.
Outstanding as usual!
You never fail to make me feel good about life, in general, when I read one of your stories. Thanks for being there and please keep writing such wonderful stories. You are truly the best and definitely my most favorite author.
A pleasant tale...
...and well told, but not much in the way of drama or conflict in need of resolution.
another good story
I am happy you wrote another story. thank you
Good Story
As usual, a fine contribution. I enjoyed the water lesson's, excellent research. A fine earth day tale.
Kinda surprised you didn't have a hot tub or a pool used for some 'recreational' activity though.
Well done, a very gentle loving story!
Thank you!
M1
Great Story
Love your Ohio settings, keep up the great writing! SEOHIO
damn good writer
that was a fine piece of work hope to see more
It's sad, though
that he has a child out there being raised by a whore and an asshole.
Cinco Estrellas, amigo!
It was a really good story, old friend. Thank you for all you do.
Thanks
A great little story. I always look forward to your work and enjoy it very much.
W.C. WAS RIGHT
in his assessment of HOH,,,TK U MLJ LV NV
A Good Read
but I have to admit that the cool gal with the evil jock, the use of contaminated water for vengeance and the black mailing fat aunt turned down my flame....
I am curious. If these last few stories are from the same person that has posted in the past as DGHear did you have a stroke or something? The last few stories seem like they were written by a 12 year old.
DG never fails us.
It is always a good day when you find a new story written by one of the true masters. This was definitely another Five Star submission by one of the best there is.
interesting
so, this is how nice guys think, huh? i definitely got a sense of character - earnest, honest, kind, easy-going - and it was pretty endearing how he kept using and bringing up that one high school project. the writing style complemented the character, and was easy to read. but i thought the hottest part was when he was flashed and fucked by the housewives. romantic HEAs just don't do a lot for me ... but i do not hold that against you :) thanks for the window into the mind of the incomprehensible (to me) regular guy from a small town who meets the woman of his dreams.
Really Enjoyable
Nice to see the little guy wins one for a change, instead of the overboard stuff that is usual, another good one DG well worth 5
One of the first stories I've fully read from start to finish! Keep up the amazing work.
Awesome
Great story. It would be sweet to see some more like it.
Another job well done -
And plenty of real life pain to be shared by all -
The social price of being overweight in this time s far higher than many understand - there was a time when being overweight was a sign of affluence and power. Now it is considered to be in "bad taste", wasteful, irresponsible. Both are wrong - however nowadays we have ways to make people suffer for the things others do not like about them - ah well - people are just plain good by nature RIGT??? - bullshit.
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