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Shower Sex-Up

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by Socially_Inept03/29/12

DAMN!

This is really one 'fucked-up' family...I like it. This story was hot. Great Job!

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by Anonymous03/29/12

More to come, or cum, I hope.

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by Anonymous03/29/12

Superb mental picture of the hot milf mom painted here - got me hard!!

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by Anonymous03/29/12

More to come i hope this was a hot story

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by Anonymous03/29/12

May We Have More Please?

Exellent story ! Yes, you have to continue this tale.

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by sabra1602303/30/12

Keep it cuming.

Please continue the story. Thanks

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by Anonymous03/30/12

More

Can anyone say foursome?????????

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by digdaddyrich03/31/12

Really sexy and taboo

It would be really hot if they had a foursome with him and his sister along with their mom and her black lover.

Although if the are not careful, there could be three pregnant women to deal with.

Wouldn't dad have a fit, if his wife and daughter were both pregnant at the same time.

Thanks for the read

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by Anonymous03/31/12

wow!

That was worth every second. Please call it chapter one WE need more

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by BrettJ03/31/12

From the author

Thanks for the kind comments and I will consider another chapter.

I did get negative feedback, one "Anonymous" poster said "Needs better writing". I delete comments like that automatically. They don't help me as an author. What was wrong? Bad grammar? You didn't buy the premise? Spelling mistakes? If you have a valid point, I'll post it, but as far as I'm concerned, comments like that are just "flaming" and I get rid of them.

I also ask that when my readers mark me as a favorite or comment, couldja please vote? When I scan back on my work, it does give me an indication of where I might want to go next.

Again, thanks a lot. New material coming this week, promise!

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by Anonymous11/06/12

Wonderful

So fucking hot, you have done it again. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

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by LAROC04/19/13

Very hot story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like most of your stories, this one has it all. Mom sounds so hot she could melt steel, and Lindsey she is just as hot. Now you add Celia, this young man is now in heaven. Please keep this story going, it was a good read and well written as always......LAROC

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by Anonymous05/04/14

Hotter than hot

Just read this again with two of my fuck buddies, it has incensed us to spend the next two days fucking and sucking each others brains out and get a mature woman to join too. More and more like this and soon. Sexed crazed fucker Lanc's UK

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