This story is very hot, but total bullshit. 1/5 for lying.
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Anonymous04/26/12
The word is
Dominant not dominate which is a verb. Look it up please. Aside from that a few other careless typos, so I hope you get someone to proofread the next time.
I agree (several in first paragraph, i.e. taught for taut - spell-checker is NOT enough) with Penthouse, except I am an easier grader ( 4*) on blatantly lying in a FICTION piece (yeah, I don't buy the MNM claim that these are pure factual experience ... I WILL believe MNM took his wife to LV, OK?). It is hard to imagine an inexperienced person changing into a sub without a LOT more time and effort than Sweety put forth!
I further agree it was very HOT - hence 4*
Thanks for your submission!
by
Anonymous04/26/12
Real? True?
Yeah right.
by
Anonymous04/26/12
You really are living in fantasy land aren't you? I guess you get off on lying.
by
Anonymous04/27/12
Real Piece Of Shit Dude
Try writing about what you know, your rubber dollie.
English
Dear Penthouse, guess what happened to me.
This story is very hot, but total bullshit. 1/5 for lying.
The word is
Dominant not dominate which is a verb. Look it up please. Aside from that a few other careless typos, so I hope you get someone to proofread the next time.
Sham
A big lie
Re: ANON Penthouse
I agree (several in first paragraph, i.e. taught for taut - spell-checker is NOT enough) with Penthouse, except I am an easier grader ( 4*) on blatantly lying in a FICTION piece (yeah, I don't buy the MNM claim that these are pure factual experience ... I WILL believe MNM took his wife to LV, OK?). It is hard to imagine an inexperienced person changing into a sub without a LOT more time and effort than Sweety put forth!
I further agree it was very HOT - hence 4*
Thanks for your submission!
Real? True?
Yeah right.
You really are living in fantasy land aren't you? I guess you get off on lying.
Real Piece Of Shit Dude
Try writing about what you know, your rubber dollie.
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