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In the Kitchen

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by tazz31703/28/12

MOVING IS TRAUMATIC

where memories must remain. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Neonurotic03/28/12

Koba

This poem is wonderful. Personal history poems written well like this one puts the reader right there with you. Although, bittersweet and made me feel sad, I enjoyed it.

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by Maria239403/29/12

so very good

and it is mention on the new poems thread in the forum.

~ maria

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by Kat051103/29/12

I still carry

the key to the home I grew up in, long since sold, but etched forever in my heart and head. I don't think it will ever leave my keychain...nor will the memories...

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