All Comments on 'Devil in The Red Dress'

beautiful...and a personal fantasy of mine

Wow. You Must Be Psychic Or Something.. Because You Basicly Wrote A Story Of What Happen To Me Last Night.. Almost Exactly The Same Thing.. The Only Thing Diffrent Was, The Chick Didnt Use A Electric Cock Ring On Me.. But Yea.. Like I Said.. You Must Be Psychic Or Something.. Either That .. Or You Hired Somebody To Stalk Me And I Don't Know About It.. >:)

Whore*

This NEEDS a continuation...maybe she can let her shemale friends use him just as brutally??? PLEASE???

Can you continue the story please????

It's a great fantasy of mine!!

Wow! next installment please! That was great, had me coming in minutes and kept me ready for more. Have her bring in a girlfriend with a bigger cock for more and DP

This is one of the hottest stories i have i have ever read.

this made me so hot and horny. and i am virgin ass and mouth

while the initial frame work is there for a great series it needs to be proof read and edited. It starts out great and then gets off track because of the grammar. there are run on sentences, past tense and present tense and a number of other things.

I love this story please keep up the good work and at least three more chapters I really wish that I was in his place

this is what is called a futanari or a hermaphrodite but not a shemale shemale's don't have pussies. i am looking forward to her next adventures

I must say this story of yours got me going I would love to be the guy in this story of yours. It would be neat if she had a girlfriend just like her that came in and joined them. Do you write request for stories? Keep up the great work I'm looking forward to reading your next one.