An Education

Nice Start

Your story has what many lesbian stories miss, which is that regardless of the genders involved, good sex requires a Dom & a sub. Keep it up. Oh, and don't forget to spank her!

An Education

i loved the story and can't wait to read the next part, thank you

Fuck

That was fucking hot! Can't wait for the rest

An Education

I hope you have more to give

More please

I love this story. A long slow buld up to this lesbian domination.
Hope the next part's going to be posted soon!

Matriculating

You are doing a fine job of matriculating the delicious Tiffany into the lesbian experience. I particularly enjoy the subtle, maddeningly slow but dominant techniques employed to seduce this babe. Do take your time turning this babe all the way inside out. Thanks and hope to be reading you for a long, long time.

I'm fucking myself right now reading this!!! Looking forward to the 2nd

At first wasn't sure about this but now really looking forward to part 2.

Keep it Going

Great story. Hope to see part 2 soon.

more please

i wasn't sure about this at first but when i finished it i thought to myslelf, where's the rest of it? this is turning me on so can you please write more?

More!!!!!!

Tiffany is not only being seduced...but, so, are we; your readers please...write more!!

I want Part 2 now!

Please say your writing it! I am waiting with bated breath.

Hot but a bit choppy at first

As other people have said I enjoyed your story and am looking forward to another installment.

As other people have also said I wasn't sure about your story at first. For me, this had to do mainly with the punctuation and sentence structure. There were places where it seemed that you joined several separate sentences together by placing a comma between them.

However, as I progressed through the story it seemed that you had improved with practice as I stopped being distracted by grammer. Either that, or the story go hot enough that I stopped paying attention to trivia...

Good luck as you continue writing.

Apologies!

Again, another apology. I have contacted member help as to why my story is taking so long to go from 'pending' to 'approved' as I uploaded it quite a while ago. Hopefully it will go through soon and thank you for all the wonderful feedback!

Unrealistic...

It is apparent that it is a written from a male perspective. It is utterly unbelievable that the main character is a female, especially in the way she is described. Unrealistic.

crap

ur crap

Don't listen to that kid.

Don't listen to that kid, he/she can't even speak English so how can they possibly think they have the right to critique your writing? Honestly, I loved it; can't wait for more.