All Comments on 'Backstage Romance Ch. 04'

That last sentence is beautiful. The desire, the setting, the imagery of fire and heat and things to come, is about as romantic as a cliffhanger can get. Nice!

Jeff sounded "immensely pleased with himself," not "myself." What I get for submitting two chapters at once all in a rush at 1 a.m. Head, meet desk.

Dont beat yourself up we understood what U were saying :)

I love this story. I cant wait to see the next chapter. really well writen. keep up the good work.

This is such a great story: older, famous actor finding love again with an innocent young man. Please keep writing quickly.

in a lot of stories once the first 'amazing- groundbreaking- first of its kind' sex scene is over, things go into a limbo.. Probably bcoz one looses the anticipation for something to happen.. U however, managed to keep the love flowing.. At the same time, u left the us with the uncertainity that all the unanswered questions bring into a new love... we'll all b cmin back for more now..so, don't keep us in suspense for too long..

the romance makes the sexual tension so much hotter. it's great to get both flustered perspectives - vulnerable, worshipping daniel and sexy, adoring jeff. i also get a kick out of kelly's humor. can't wait for the next installment!

' I could see a very tempting bulge in his pants, and briefly considered going down on him right there in the car. Remembering the death-defying ride to his house the previous night, though, I squashed the urge firmly. No need to tempt fate twice in less than twenty-four hours.'

Daniel thinks in the funniest ways, his thoughts just crack me up , his just like my boyfriend shy and innocent in bed but feisty in the bedroom lol!! i love your story off to read chp 5

The pace sells this story. Slow and romantic.

Romantic, tantalising, fun, fulfilling our hopes for the love development between two very sweet guys. What more could we want - oh yes, a short but hot shower scene, yum.

These two are absolutely adorable!