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Loved the story...
I loss this story from the begining to end. I truly wish there was more. I look forward for more stories from you...Keep up the good work!!!
Thanks for your comments!
I'm glad you liked the story. As the old saying goes - never say never. More Carmina and Kirk chapters may be on the horizon. For now there are a couple of other stories being written. I hope you will like them too when they are posted in a couple of weeks. (Sorry I can't do them faster - work gets in the way:>)
ALL THAT STARTS WELL, ENDS WELL..
A damn good story, and very well written. The story's conclusion was a surprise. I'm happy for Carmina..I always felt that she was a good woman,... justifiably angry, with a little frustration.. But definitely deserved better. The "tease" was worth it.
I hope that your next offering is written,as well.
To RedCat 770
I appreciate your comments and am glad that you enjoyed the story. Hopefully you'll also enjoy the two new series that I am working on - Loose Lips and Silk Road (working titles). I didn't intend to "tease" but, as I peeled away the layers of the onion, that is what occurred. This was my first effort but thanks to comments and encouragement like yours, I think I will do better in the future.
Great stories
I loved reading erotic novels to help set your mind away from work. That being said, this story was well written and I enjoyed it very much. I hope you continue to write more. looking forward to the new ones coming up.
wow
That was a hot hot story and well written. italian/american woman here, so i could relate to some of the subtleties in it...and no so sublteties. :) lol It was like reading one of my own fantasies. I want more!
-thefungirl8@yahoo.com
To Fungirl
I'm glad you enjoyed my first story. Comments like yours have inspired me to write more. I hope you find the two that I am working on equally stimulating!
BlkRainbow
One of the best created stories I have read, That actually had a theme and a showed tenderness. Being a black male I appreciated the story
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