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Bloody Vampires! Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/03/12

Nice one

Little low on the sex, but still an amazing story! Shows your quality as a writer.

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by mavir904/03/12

Looks Promising

I like it so far, can't wait for the next chapter

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by brian35804/04/12

Thanks for another great chapter!

As previously mentioned, low on sex but a good development of the story, and it introduced us to the lovely Sharon!

I hope Danny & Sharon get it on. They deserve it! :-)

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by Soebek11004/04/12

Excellent again!

More good work from you! I'm enjoying this series immensely.

One thing I noticed - you mentioned early in the story that Sharon had deep red hair, but later on (when he's groping her tit outside of the t-shirt) you describe her as blonde:

"Danny gave a blissful groan as the busty blonde squeezed his hard-on."

Just a small thing! Excellent stories!

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by TheBlackMagician04/05/12

Holy ****!

What a surprising ending! I loved it. And the scene in the club was super hot. I hope he gets to spend a little more time with Sharon - I think she was getting him to grope her a little more than she needed to, so maybe she secretly liked it! It'd be nice to see those tits swinging free! Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous04/06/12

Reminds me of . . .

The Jimbo Bond series. I like the new characters and am eager to see where this one goes.

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by Anonymous04/10/12

Yay!!!!

GT Rulez!!!!

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