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Nice one
Little low on the sex, but still an amazing story! Shows your quality as a writer.
Looks Promising
I like it so far, can't wait for the next chapter
Thanks for another great chapter!
As previously mentioned, low on sex but a good development of the story, and it introduced us to the lovely Sharon!
I hope Danny & Sharon get it on. They deserve it! :-)
Excellent again!
More good work from you! I'm enjoying this series immensely.
One thing I noticed - you mentioned early in the story that Sharon had deep red hair, but later on (when he's groping her tit outside of the t-shirt) you describe her as blonde:
"Danny gave a blissful groan as the busty blonde squeezed his hard-on."
Just a small thing! Excellent stories!
Holy ****!
What a surprising ending! I loved it. And the scene in the club was super hot. I hope he gets to spend a little more time with Sharon - I think she was getting him to grope her a little more than she needed to, so maybe she secretly liked it! It'd be nice to see those tits swinging free! Keep up the good work.
Reminds me of . . .
The Jimbo Bond series. I like the new characters and am eager to see where this one goes.
Yay!!!!
GT Rulez!!!!
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