All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 16'

Please, please find a way to save Bridge. What Luma really needs to find is a psychic healer. I love the characters, the setting, the story and look forward to reading the rest of the story.

I'm so glad that Star has finally pulled through and realised that Luma is in love with him. On the other hand Bridge is dying, maybe the only way of saving Luma is to attempt to turn him into a vampire *hint hint*. -Tycoonier

I love this series, but am so afraid you are going to let Bridge die!!! He is a healing presence in Luma'shouse and they need that. Please find away to save him!!!

Bridge is like the glue that holds the house together so I hope he does't die. He has the sweetest soul.

I love this story and you always stop on the interesting parts. Finally Star opens up but he is still lying to himself and Luma and yes I agree Bridge is too beautiful to die but I have faith in Luma next please..... soon please!!!

Please don't pull a Stephen King. Bridge is too good for that.

please write more i wanna know bridge need to live please i beg you wirte more my reader soul is dying i need to read the rest

It's all there, ready and waiting. Blame the editors if it's not getting out fast enough :)

As for Bridge. I won't keep you waiting any longer. He's going to.........

you should make this like 25 chapters long

ive been waiting for this

woot woot!!!!! worth the wait ...sighs i melted into this chapter