Wow, that was hot... and really well written, too. ;)
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Anonymous04/22/12
Cliche - nope.
I'm surprised you prefaced this story as cliche. I've read hundreds of stories over the years and not one was about lessons in oral sex - especially where the teacher and student are so feverishly involved in the tutelage. Very well written - keep up the good work!
made my mouth water and my cock drip with excitement
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Anonymous04/23/12
Great story
I wish I could go back to the good old college days.
I like stories written as though they are true.
Hope you gave them lessons on how to please the
females also. Maybe getting feedback from each of
them as to what feels the best.
Looking forward to the next story.
I love it! Who cares if the scenario is a little cliche -- if you can write it like that, it's as exhilarating as ever. And there's nothing tame about it -- just like your characters say, sometimes a blowjob is more than enough! This is such a well balanced story. You give enough background to get the reader involved. But the descriptions are titillating right from the beginning, and you don't take too long to get us to the height of the action. The dialogue is sexy and realistic, and you give all of the characters a voice. Keep this up, and I'll be checking back for more -- I'd love to read more about these roommates!!
...and the best thing about it is that all the way long I was somehow waiting for the third girl to join this great blowjob class. The descriptions were very detailed but still far from boredom. Keep writing that way!
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Hot story
Keep up the writing!
Hot!
Wow, that was hot... and really well written, too. ;)
Cliche - nope.
I'm surprised you prefaced this story as cliche. I've read hundreds of stories over the years and not one was about lessons in oral sex - especially where the teacher and student are so feverishly involved in the tutelage. Very well written - keep up the good work!
Great!
Loved it, great idea - well written and straight into favorites.
got a good visual
made my mouth water and my cock drip with excitement
Great story
I wish I could go back to the good old college days.
I like stories written as though they are true.
Hope you gave them lessons on how to please the
females also. Maybe getting feedback from each of
them as to what feels the best.
Looking forward to the next story.
Crazy hot
I love it! Who cares if the scenario is a little cliche -- if you can write it like that, it's as exhilarating as ever. And there's nothing tame about it -- just like your characters say, sometimes a blowjob is more than enough! This is such a well balanced story. You give enough background to get the reader involved. But the descriptions are titillating right from the beginning, and you don't take too long to get us to the height of the action. The dialogue is sexy and realistic, and you give all of the characters a voice. Keep this up, and I'll be checking back for more -- I'd love to read more about these roommates!!
Magnificent story !...
...and the best thing about it is that all the way long I was somehow waiting for the third girl to join this great blowjob class. The descriptions were very detailed but still far from boredom. Keep writing that way!
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