Short, but sweet. Nice first effort.
just write it
I love this story, when its from the girls point of veiw AND you include dialog, nothing beats that. Fantastic story.
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*****
Short, but sweet. Nice first effort.
F-U-C-K
just write it
I love it
I love this story, when its from the girls point of veiw AND you include dialog, nothing beats that. Fantastic story.
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