All Comments on 'Technical Difficulties Episode 15'

Curious what will happen next.

The first author I really fell in love with on this site, and YOU'RE BACK!!! It's been five months since you're last post, and I know life happens sometimes but I had pretty much given up hope of this story being completed.... AND YOU CAME BACK! You just made my day, girlfriend. Or my week. :D

(please)

15 chapters of buildup and you STOP writing it? Get back on here and give us the goods girl!

this is strangely exciting

i waited 15 chapters for it to get finally good and you stop -.-

If anyone has read this far and thinks they might be able to help me get this story moving again, please drop me a note. (See my message about it in the editor's forum - http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=51894367#post51894367) I have written a couple versions of episode 16, but the plot outline isn't exactly working, the new secondary characters are boring cardboard cutouts, and I really could use somebody to talk to about it.

Outstanding! Do you take oneshot requests?

WTF? Ummm...really? I stayed up till 230am to read the whole story and this is how u end it? Again..WTF? I am fairly new to Literotica, but what is the deal with one page chapters? How about five three page chapters? And Zach didn't even become a freaking vampire till almost the end of the story. And who the hell turned him? And so, what, there are vampires everywhere? The character story was great, but a couple of other details would have been helpful. Sorry for being a bitch, but it's way late.