All Comments on 'Bustysandra Pleases Hubby'

So, what is dogging? You said the husband explained it to the wife but you never explained it to the readers.

doesn't do a thing for mine.

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For erotic writing looking forward to you next submission. Thanks for sharing.

The husband is an asshole, and the story sucks.

that takes place between hubbie and his darling wife, involving romance, soft lights and rose petals and drives in the countryside. Thanks for writing. I think. 3*

he smoked the fattest cock, his cornhole buggered, betrayed!

Could have been a little longer or drag out a bit more. And whether fact or sexy fiction it got me and my hubby off. Thank you for submitting

Please..... find a story editor. Those were the longest, non-punctuated sentences I have ever seen.

Well, this short story has little to recommend. Author should read most of the 'How to' category in Literotica and try again.

Nothing more to add.

and then became one. TK U MLJ LV NV

And a proud little WACC

It was short and sweet . The flow was nearly there. But it lacked content and realism .

Go dogging, have a look at what happens and how , but more importantly why

brilliant very hot horny story loved it BUSTYSANDRA PLEASES HUBBY.

i can't wait to read even more of your very horny erotic stories .

this was awesome loved it more please

sexy stuff... love the things that are in your head :-)

Keep writing, your stories so far are a good start.

I went to the U.K. to visit my friend Ian.He had got married and moved there 8 years ago.They were both in there 50s,i was 47.Wednesday was their special night,Kate was dressed in a shortish dress,that highlighted her rather plump arse,nylons,they asked if i wanted to come along,sure.We drove to a car park,there were 4 other cars there,we parked near the others.Ian and i got out,walked past a car where a woman was giving a guy a blow job in the front seat.Ian opened the door,her dress up around her waist,her pussy on display,he took out his cock and guided it into her,she didnt lift her head as he fucked her.He pulled back,said want some,i was shocked,shook my head no,we walked back to his van,his wife was on her knees a guys cock in her mouth,Ian looked and went back to the other woman.My eyes were riveted on Kates pussy,my cock was hard,i looked around,a guy moved behind her and holding her guided his cock into her pussy.She lifted her head,pushed back onto him,then stayed still as he banged into her,the guy in her mouth cumming,moving away,he couldnt hold any longer and filled her.He pulled away,no sooner than he had done so than another guy took his place,he didnt last long.My cock still hard,still on her knees,i moved behind her,slid into her pussy,so wet,sloppy,i pushed her down my cock lined with her arse and slowly pushed forward,she stayed still,as finally i entered her,she pulled forward and said slowly,her anal ring squeezing the head of my cock,i couldnt help it,my cumm blasted into her a she pushed back,making it easy to slide my hard cock in and out of her arse until i was done.The ride home was interesting as Ian lay down in the back,his wife bouncing up and down on him then straddling his face as he licked and sucked her to a noisy orgasm.

nice story but too quick

So very English, so very cuck.

This could be a lot better if it was read again before posting online, it needs someone to help sort out the mistakes and made a bit longer pace it out.

Nice story but not long enough

Looking forward to more adventures. Hot story!