Sheet Metal Memories

Has he been to his doctor? He needs to be checked for brain tumors.

Z

Great Story . . .

I really enjoyed your story. It wasn't the usual wife-cheating story. Being a car guy myself, I can appreciate the car telling you things. No matter what others say, keep up the great writing. Thanx

Yep, STD has rotted the ole brain.

Nothing else to say. Dull cuckold wimp story..

Great tale

I found this excellent! Then I got to laugh even more as I read the comments! Wow, some people are really literal. Keep up the good work and send us more from left field.

They have not got any children so I think only 1 couse would be good to let his wife remain if he wanted to hide much money from her for the 3-4 years later divorce proceedings.

This was different & weird .

I like that.

What an awesome read!

Thank you for this story! What a great story line!

to the anon whoe wrote "Nothing else to say. Dull cuckold wimp story.."

His victory was complete, his competition destroyed, and she knows that just one indiscretion will be the end of her.

Tell me, how is that being a spineless cuckold wimp?

The rational man

and his Jag (a gentleman!)

Much better than 'My Mother, the Car!' (a US TV series with Dick VanDyke). Quirky as it gets. Also reminds me of Koster's novel 'The Dissertation' from the standpoint of highly unusual sources of intelligence!

5*

Fun read

Unusual enough to enjoy.

As to cuckold wimp, cuckold, yes, he had no choice about that. Wimp? He mows down all the people who fucked his wife and he has his wife totally under his control. He isn't living in a hotel drinking himself into a stupor and he hasn't paid his wife any money. She can't divorce him unless she wants her reputation totally destroyed and he can pretty much do whatever he wants. She is being followed and cannot hook up with anyone. Not too wimpy by my evaluation. I personally might not want to be saddled with such a wife but he does owe her ten years worth of revenge. Keep watching her, keep her under control, screw her as he wants to. Dump her later. It works for him.

5 star

Nice dark tale... Brings to mind the motto, better the enemy u know than one you dont.... Replace enemy with whore/slut. Something for the TTB crowd to ponder.

Great story - loved it. Just enough off the normal beaten path to make it interesting.

Good outline

Being a TTB guy, I basically liked the idea of this story. However, it would have been far better with more depth, dialogue and pain for the betrayers. The reader would like to see some real retribution for the wife and business partner as well as the others who had a part in the husband's cuckolding. He owed all of them big time. Now the husband needs to find a woman who is worth loving.

A good fun story

Not too believable but a good story and a good read. One of those stories you wish could be real, where the bad guys get what is coming to them.

Thanks for the story

Sorry, it didn't do i for me

Well, a trouble free Jaguar , I don't believe that!, Partner stealling millions, maybe, Wife fucking partner for ten years, don't believe it. Why? You don't say. What will he do about it? Nothing! Where is the plot? where is the story? Why do we care?.

So kick her ass out

Sell to a whore house why stay married. 3 stars

Funny Revenge

He had to find out one way or another. At least the Jag was still his friend. Man's best friend. His car. Oh, and by the way:

I HATE CHEATING WIVES

HA

SO FAR SO GOOD

but stay away from SS06'S Tang. TK U MLJ LV NV

Completely unrealistic

I was able to suspend disbelief and accept the talking car and all the rest, but a reliable Jaguar? Lucas, the Prince of Darkness, forbids it! Otherwise, what a quirky, interesting story! Made my afternoon.

let the cucking continue

anyone who has been betrayed knows how cuckdogg feels; like a cuck. the problem for those wankers is that cucking did not continue; long term cucking is good medicine but they need continuous long term cucking, hence the 3 stars.

betrayed? cuckeye knows best

If by "knows" you are referring to the Biblical interpretation of the word, cuckeye definitely "knows" betrayed.

Well that was different

Beats the crap out of some of the latest trash stories submitted to loving wives. At least I got a chuckle out of this one. Not a bad read author. Short and to the point. Thanks for the entertainment. ML

Sorry but,

Why did he not go for real revenge make her sign a post nuptial agreement, she gets a limited allowance no more affairs, he gets money, women and the world.

He should have made her suck his cock clean of her shit and then pissed in her mouth making sure she swallowed all of his liquid gold

Funny!!

Good Read.

I enjoyed the story.

Thanks for sharing it!

I Like

It was a different type of story--short, I LIKED IT.

Loved

The Story you should try writing more stories with Objects telling on the Cheaters.
if a Car would work what about a Bed or Shower.

A Quirky, Interesting Story, & Then The Bad Ending

Maybe a sequel with a real ending.

Clever and Original

Very good! I really like the car.

keep writing

please keep them coming,cheating wives. this one was different

Well done!

Liked the plot devices and as always, sluts should always get screwed in the end.

Un - Fucking - Believable

A Jag that starts every time and has never had a problem?
That's almost as believable as a wimp assed lawyer keeping his slut wife around after hanging the horns on him for ten years.

Fun WACC story

Thanks for the read

Hoepfully included her life being stripped of the amenities she had, to a significant extent where she's in a guilded cage.

That is fucking BRILLIANT!

"After we cleaned up we made simple pact: she fucks no one but me. Period."

That is a BRILLIANT idea! A lot of couples should do that!

Maybe invite the family...some friends...exchange some tokens of fidelty to remind each other and symbolize the pact...maybe make it a legal document or some kind of license...make it a party

Oh...wait...um...never mind...

Get the Law correct

Adultery will only get you a divorce. Catching your wife or husband in an affair with one or hundred paramours will not get you one dime more.

great story

you wrote this in a way that all men who have been married to a cheating bitch can relate. i did not have to seek revenge though, karma has been real nasty to her.

DAMN !! Clinical Efficiency...

Good story and well written.

#2 MAKE A PLAN, GO FOR BROKE

leave no stones unturned and take out the trash. TK U MLJ LV NV

My kind of man...

I know that it is just a story so I give kudos to the author.

Damn funny

And who gives a fuck about reality this is fiction. What idiot complains about the law not being accurate when you have a fucking talking car?

Enjoyed it

An interesting flash story. Why keep the bitch?

Second Comment

I hate cheating whores. But I like honest Jags.

Nice

A five for originality.

Nice

A pleasant piece of revenge fiction. Nice, original angle and swift, merciless vengeance. Well done!

everyone should have known

He was a clueless cuck when early in the tale he admitted he drives a mustang.

Revenge my ass!!!

He "finally" gets to stick his dick in the WHORE wife's ass that's had 100's (?) of other cocks in it for the past TEN YEARS ... oh I and the CUNT "also promised" not to fuck anymore men .. and that's what you call revenge?!?

BogartsCUCK wouldn't know "Revenge" if it kicked him in his two inch dick!!!

Nice car 0

Decent guy - clueless like so many in RL -

He makes them pay - the partner is destroyed - quietly efficiently and completely, the wife is now hobbled and his slave - it works - he has already been abused and exposed to whatever shit she had done - now he gets his and she gets shit on for a change.

Must be a one off jag cause they're normally as unreliable as shit

The car was the best part of the story, I can understand why he wanted to keep it, but he needed to rid himself of the bitch even if it cost him money