by Lukenjade
Sounds a bit like 'Bob & Carol & Ted & Alice'. They get close to swapping, then back off (or did Jade deliver an early BJ?) mechanically, there are too many things which do not forward the story (such as taxi rides) and too little development of the characters and their interactions.
Liked the story so far, but what happens next.... Hmmm... Will they all end up in bed together, a nice four some, full swap?