All Comments on 'The Fallout Ch. 02'

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LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 12 years ago
Unusual relationship

Sounds a bit like 'Bob & Carol & Ted & Alice'. They get close to swapping, then back off (or did Jade deliver an early BJ?) mechanically, there are too many things which do not forward the story (such as taxi rides) and too little development of the characters and their interactions.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Crap

another asshole story ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Keep it up!

I love the idea. Keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
So far so good.

Liked the story so far, but what happens next.... Hmmm... Will they all end up in bed together, a nice four some, full swap?

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

No love here for this poor attempt to make wife sharing appealing.

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