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R & R Ch. 01

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by Anonymous04/06/12

Good Start

Look forward to more.

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by Anonymous04/06/12

hrm...

its got a semi-decent start, but this should have been like a ch 00 or something... it was so short just as i was starting to get into it, well... it ended...

its like getting ready for sex only to be interrupted or like many of old age, rapidly lose interest...

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by mavir904/07/12

This Holds Promise

Good start albeit a bit on the short side, waiting for the follow on chapters.

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