All Comments on 'My Submissive'

I simply could not let the stupid and self-contraditory comment from the anonymous coward stand alone. Although being foreign to the English language I could tell that the story was very well written. The sexual tension is there right from the start, and just increases for every paragraph. The repetitive use of sexual words and phrases reinforces the excitement. There must be thousands out there to love your story! Just look at the top score it got! No Write more, please!

Super hot. Except that you claim otherwise, I would have guessed that this was written by a male sub. At the same time, I think the size described is unrealistic. For most small women (like the one in your story), 7 inches can be too much (i.e. painfully deep). Even if she were riding cowgirl, she would need to restrain the stallion so it could not buck.

Your writing is marvelous. I can see myself being trained by you. It would be an honor to submit to your every wish.

Just finished reading your first section. It was marvelous. I could see myself being displayed in front of you totally naked. It was very exciting. I can't wait to read the next sections.

Loved it !

Well written evilly conceived

You write well, grammar, spelling are good and there are precious few typos.

What a shame that the subject matter is so boring. Just constant repetition of the same thing. Mind you, she is such a total bitch and he is a total wimp, so they deserve each other. I hope that he just walks out preferably after beating the life out of her.

Godsh, I wish the writer continued this story.