It was a Fantastic Day! 5*.
Do you know what would make this story super awesome? An epilog of how it went after Rob found out about Teri's affrair.
...got screwed over in the divorce because he rushed and didn't bother to protect himself and his assets.
...Heart Break Hotel story....damn ending just drops off..still...5..Stars!
Way to go Rob.
WHY was it not a longer story. It would not have been a 4 page story.
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It wasn't A Great Day
It was a Fantastic Day! 5*.
Do you know what?
Do you know what would make this story super awesome? An epilog of how it went after Rob found out about Teri's affrair.
And then the guy...
...got screwed over in the divorce because he rushed and didn't bother to protect himself and his assets.
Slam Bam thank you mam...
...Heart Break Hotel story....damn ending just drops off..still...5..Stars!
Just deserts.
Way to go Rob.
WHY was it not a longer story. It would not have been a 4 page story.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Great Day or
More submissions by Just Plain Bob.