Diesel seems to have come to a Decision about what he wants but will Madison want what Diesel wants or will her Despair chase him away.
Wow, that was scary. But what about the baby?
The chapter felt unfinished.
I was excited when I saw the new update.... Thanks for that surprise but there has to be more.. what about the baby and what was Diesel about to tell Madison??
Please update soon!
Another short update, I know! But I'm working on a good long chapter to submit. I didn't mention the baby because no one knows she's pregnant, nor would the paramedics have known at that moment, but be sure that all knots shall be tied, all questions answered in the next update.
Thank you so much for sticking with the series, the readers alone have renewed my interest in Madison and Diesel's story!
Really happy for the update.
I bout had a heart attack when I found out she died, then came back.....DAMN YOU!!!!
*grins sheepishly* good job though....
I know you're going to give us a great conclusion to this love story.
okay, I can breathe after that chapter!!! looking forward to the much longer update!! thanks for sharing
This chapter was awesome!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
I was so excited to see an update and when I thought she died-I went into shock. I am hooked and can't wait for the longer (much longer) update:)
That was a bit scary...I was on the verge of tears when reading about Madison's "death"...
Can't wait for the next update! :)
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!
That was am excellent update so happy that he got there and that she's gonna be ok looking forward to see what happens next please update again real soon it was torture waiting wondering how things was gonna turn out thanks!!
Please update soon...want to read more....
And the baby too I hope! UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!
WHERE ARE YOOOOOU? :(
This is good!
I want a happy ending!!!
This story is so hot! I want more! Please please continue!
I have been following this story for years.... SWEET JESUS YOU'RE KILLING MEEEEEEE!!!!! PLEASE!!! KILLING MEEEEEEE! (loud shoulder shaking sobs)
Why are you so mean? Please! Oh please! Finish it (said in a Mortal Kombat voice)
I hope all is well with you, now on to pressing matters, lol.. please update when you are not so busy. It seems as though Madison and Diesel's time is coming to an end with their story. Thank goodness Madison did not die. I would like to see how they end up.
I loved this story so much and I check for updates on it every other week (pathetic I know). you are breaking my heart with this" leave em hanging" business. I know writing is hard but your public awaits... soooooo. chop chop..
I have reason to believe something awful happened to the author and thats why none of the storys were ever finished. And I don't think they will ever be finished. I honestly hope the author is okay and I'm just assuming the worst
Gracious I had no rest till I finished this in a sitting!! Nice finale yet an epilogue would have been nice! Well done, best I've read in a while. Amazing characters I grew to love like I know them personally.
I was crying tears of joy once I found out Madison made it. This story was heart touching and hot at the same time.
Quite a good story. If this is the end I guess we'll have to live with it. I hope the chest wound does not present problems with her pregnancy. Cheers!
Wow I'm so glad I have the story a chance, is really good, could be a movie
Leave us hanging like that?
This is the ending....I guess I should be grateful that it's free.
Just because this is a free site does not give the writers a right to keep people in suspense as to what happens next. That is sooo wring. Yes Madison is alive, but the story has many unfinished questions.
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