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A Perfect Day

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by NaughtyGirlNancy04/04/12

I Loved this

TheOnlyTigerGirl... you and I think alike! I absolutely love sucking a nice big hard cock. Sometimes nothing is better, and you have captured that feeling in this story. My onlu problem is that I wish it was longer... the story not the cock.. Keep up the good work.

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by GobletHolly18204/05/12

every day is a perfect day for a blowjob!

i suppose earth day is an especially good day for FOREST fellatio, though:) this read like a hot email you'd send to someone. it comes across as sincerely aroused (the narrator convinced me she loves to suck cock!) but i find stories much easier to enjoy when i'm not tripped up by typos and emailisms like "thru" (or "emailism", lol). check out literotica's volunteer editors -- they are lovely and very easy to use and then you don't even need to worry about spelling/grammar. your details are real and convincing; please keep (um, writing about) sucking cock.

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