homeNonHumanGod Of The Vampire RacePublic Comments

All Comments  for

God Of The Vampire Race

bySamuelx©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/08/12

Love it!!!!!!

I hope u continue ur story! I love this! Wonderful!! =)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by SenieceTaO04/09/12

Intrigued

Definitely intrigued, but get some chat lines going, not .. 'I asked him this and he told me that..' Give your characters some personality we can all feel and relate to. I find I get bored real quick when there isnt any dialog and just large blocks of paragraphs. Look forward to your next chapter.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to God Of The Vampire Race  or
More submissions by Samuelx.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel