thats how we met and Thats All Folks. TK U MLJ LV NV
Pretty good overall, but needed a little bit more of a build-up to the sex in the back room; The win in game 2 was too easy after how easy she won the first game.
Thank you.
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thats how we met and Thats All Folks. TK U MLJ LV NV
Nice try
Pretty good overall, but needed a little bit more of a build-up to the sex in the back room; The win in game 2 was too easy after how easy she won the first game.
A good piece of writing.
Thank you.
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