All Comments on 'Bloody Vampires! Ch. 04'

by GeorgeTasker

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Soebek110Soebek110about 12 years ago
Amazing as always.

Another fantastic chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great but short

very good stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Intrigued

... and really looking forward to where this is going. Adding a bit of jealousy to the mix was a great move.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yummy yum yum...

Keep the chapters coming! You are making an excellent comeback! It's almost like reading a hardcore version of True Blood. Your pen and mind are magical, good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome

Awesome story, man. Love the characters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
It's alright . . . .

Guess this was more for development. Still, I hope the next chapter is better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Best story yet

This is the best story you've written so far in my opinion, and each chapter is better than the last! Can't wait to get to the sex, between sylvia and danny, and maybe sylvia and others.

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