cuts through all the posturing and deviousness that can poison a relationship. I liked the hero better as a peer than as a benevolent despot (in the original story from earlier that evening! ) Where is this bar???
And a fitting sequel it is. A very good, well written pair of nicely erotic stories.
An interesting story line and especially good depiction of the attractions of the smells and tastes of sex.
awesome. i can't believe the opportunities that exist if one pays attention. i wished i had that aggression when i was younger.
well done, will, or what ever your name is. i have enjoyed every one of the stories i have read so far.
however, i'm still waiting for the finish of Ronnie, her daughter, Marie & Marlene. there was a long way to go in that story. i'm posting this here because this other comment is only one month old & hopefully, the author will see it.
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cuts through all the posturing and deviousness that can poison a relationship. I liked the hero better as a peer than as a benevolent despot (in the original story from earlier that evening! ) Where is this bar???
Ah yes, the sequel
And a fitting sequel it is. A very good, well written pair of nicely erotic stories.
An interesting story line and especially good depiction of the attractions of the smells and tastes of sex.
Tasty fun had by all
Perfect completion for a sequel .... love the form of writing can see in my mind the two people enjoying each other.. well done
5*****..
awesome. i can't believe the opportunities that exist if one pays attention. i wished i had that aggression when i was younger.
well done, will, or what ever your name is. i have enjoyed every one of the stories i have read so far.
however, i'm still waiting for the finish of Ronnie, her daughter, Marie & Marlene. there was a long way to go in that story. i'm posting this here because this other comment is only one month old & hopefully, the author will see it.
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