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A Better Man than I Deserve

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by Anonymous

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by Huedogg204/14/12

gave it a 3 star

to me it's a lie, the whole marriage from the time she fucked the other guy thinking he cheated. She's right, she doesn't deserve her husband.

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by chytown04/14/12

Thanks

For the read.

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by Anonymous04/14/12

gotta go with huecuck on this one

He is the cuckold-in-residency here, those of us who have never been cucks look to experienced cuckolds to get some insight into cuckold stories and cuckdogg is the expert.

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by Bourbondog04/15/12

No pussy for gay boy anon

I agree with anon. You must get the pussy before you can understand this story so he must refer to those who get pussy like-Hue

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by cpete04/15/12

EMMR-a nice little tale told from the wifes POV. Well done for a first story. I wish you had expanded on the segment about hubby finding out soon after the event. How did wife know? What actions made wife think hubby found out?

A bit of a cliffhanger with the ending about her coming clean-not bad to leave readers wanting more

thanks for posting

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by Lickideesplit04/15/12

For a dude

you do 'conniving bitch' pretty well! Except that no woman would have put loaded 'cum-catcher' drawers in the laundry hamper to be found. (How do I know this? My wife assured me that is day 2 of basic training for girls in 6th grade! Oops, now I'm a little worried! - her used panties are always cleaner than I'd think they should be at the end of the day!)

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by digdaddyrich04/15/12

An unusual cheating wife story

A cleaver approach to a cheating wife story, and I though it was a very well presented story.

Interesting and erotic to read.

Thanks for the good read.

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by simaddict04/15/12

More sex.

More detailed sex would make your story more erotic. Instead of telling your readers what happened, make them feel what happened.

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by betrayedbylove04/16/12

I don't know

Where does this crap come from. Do these type of women really exist? How can a wonderful husband not see thru this type of slut over a lifetime? What the fuck!

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by Anonymous04/27/12

the wife in this story would have done the world a favor

by shooting her friend then herself and your real exwife isnt worth thinking about

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by MarvinS04/30/12

Photo

How can a woman not recognize herself in a photograph?

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by Anonymous06/03/12

Slut

I hope he disappears without a trace. Fuck her.

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by Anonymous07/24/12

People make mistakes...

I, for one, was glad to see a little different story. These things happen. A happy ending once in a while is refreshing.

Just too lazy to sign in. Bfreetorun

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by tazz31708/23/12

GOSSIP AND LIES

and lack of committment leads to strife, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tanker13510/05/12

Revenge is fucking sweet

I don't know how you wouldn't recongnise a picture of yourself, esspecially one of you naked. But that aside, I do love a good story where the bitch gets fucked in the end. Good story, keep it up. To bad your ex didn't see it that way.

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by betrayedbylove10/05/12

Second Comment

With any luck Garth will leave his bitch wife or check his now adult children's DNA to see if he is the father. Although many years later, let everyone know what a cunt she really is. Fuck her.

Don't mind me. It's time for my medication.
HA

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by RePhil01/08/13

Garth placed the muzzle against the pillow

A small POP was the last thing she heard...... in this life time. THE END

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by Anonymous01/19/13

Happy ending?

Not for Garth.

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by Bfreetorun02/26/13

So, this bitch that got pregnant by a man other than her husband...

Is selfishly going to make herself feel better by telling all after their big anniversary. I hope he beats the shit out of her and tells her children what a slut she is and with a Black man, no less. No way he would forgive her but the story says he knew and let it go, what a wimp. He has no way out, now. He must really love her. She is a cheating bitch and always will be. Like someone said, he should check the DNA of all their kids and make her life a misery. Or, he can divorce her and get to pay her alimony and child support for five kids. As soon as the last kid is 18 he should haul ass, there are other women, even for old men. Yes, l realize it is just a story.

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by Tavadelphin05/15/13

She did NOT get pregnant -

Commentators really need to pay attention to a story before they comment on it -

She WAS stupid but recovered before it became a total disaster - she knows he found out about it somehow but she does need to make sure he knows the truth not just someone else's story - that is how the shit got started in the first place heh

No sense in more half truths or lies -

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by cantbuymy05/15/13

You are right he did not get her pregnant but she took the morning after pill so we don't know for sure.

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by Bfreetorun05/27/13

I see my vitriolic comment below.

Please allow me to backtrack, I had my facts wrong (she did not get pregnant) and I was unnecessarily hard on his wife. We all make mistakes, she was stressed out but her choice of men to help her get revenge was horrible and I am sorry she went that route. Yes, I know that it is just a story, she lucked out in the story.

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by bobby990911/10/13

In your prologue you say

your ex never came back for an explanation. Why should he? You took her word over his. That was strike one. If you did 1/10 of what you described in the story (fiction is usually based in fact), strike two. In this case, strike two is a double - aaannnnnd yur OUT!

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by crischateu03/26/14

Thanks for sharing.

Because sharing is caring. I think you gave her a very nice write up. Surely more than she deserved.

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by Anonymous04/07/15

1 STAR

*

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by Eddboy08/29/15

after she tells him

he should dump her ass

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by Goodhue10/29/15

A Selfish Cunt!

Tell him?! Just to ease her mind?! What a fucking piece of shit!!! ~ He should bitch-slap the shit out of her and then dump her sorry ass!
Maybe Sienna's Bubba Jr. should then slip her his 15 inches,UP HER ASS!!!

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by Anonymous11/15/15

Good job

It makes me feel dirty.
The poor guy living his lie for all those years.

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by sinsational8304/12/16

Guess You Can Tell

By the comments of the other readers that you have a pretty good story here. I mean any story that can ruffle the feathers of the readers here has to be good. Me, myself, I enjoyed the story all the thru including the end. Something I don't usually do is give many stories 5 stars but this story deserves it. Good job.

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by tazz31704/12/16

WHO SAYS YOU CANT FALL INTO

and come out smelling with fragrance, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous06/13/16

women

You notice all these women in this stories will jump at the chance to cheat because they heard their husbands did. How in the heck did they so dumb.

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by Anonymous07/22/16

1*

absurd shit.

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by Anonymous07/22/16

5

excellent story

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by DrSemblance08/24/16

Abominable behaviour.

She got revenge? Bullshit. She raped another woman and made a child.

She destroyed 2 lives, Sen, and the child. She sentenced the child to a low life mother and no father.

For that alone she should die, that and she is too stupid to live anyway.

Hey, it's fiction. I know it is just a story. It is just an awful piece of shit story.

However, it was pretty well written. You successfully created an evil cunt worthy of hatred and death. Maybe not a slow torturous death, since she did show a modicum of remorse. But, deserving a bullet between the eyes none the less.

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