A Day Like No Other

Not bad

Thats was interesting , I hope see calls too

poorly written

Come on -- learn to write and spell, and/or use the editing assistance Literotica offers. Your story is wrecked by the way it reads.

spell check

The story was ok, but the grammer could use a lot of work.

Great story, but really.....I almost stopped reading because of how poorly it was written. Verb-noun agreement, spell check. Both were made for a reason.

One Star

Maybe 3 stars for the story, but at least 2 off for the appalling writing! As others have already noted, this is all but unreadable.

Sorry

I'm sorry if my story is unreadable, this was just a story i wrote for my partner regarding the time we met, I didn't know you could get help editing with the on-line app .. and now I cant unpost it.

I put it up here after a dear from a friend cos she liked it.
For those who enjoy it I'm glad and for those who didn't i'm sorry.

Happy reading people

StrangersCandy00

Wow