Sleeping with My Pregnant Mother

Strange yet realistic. It works.

I have to say, incest fiction is right up there with non-consensual and interracial/cuckold fiction for an absurd (thankfully so, in many cases), lack of realism. Your story did not fit the usual patterns. It was a very timid, paced seduction on both parts- the mother in the story obviously had some intent of sleeping with her son, and the young man was obviously infatuated.

You were very descriptive, almost as if you were reciting from memory-- you have a talent for painting with words. I would be fascinated to see how you develop the story, and perhaps explore the thought processes of the mother/son dynamic. What happened, aside from a case of the hornies, to have a son sleep with his mother, his father's wife. What happened, aside from neglect and need, to have a mother sleep with her son.

Good job, hope you continue.

~Tendermindholes

Ditto

Tendermindholes pretty much said it all. You have a good appreciation for giving the reader a play by play account of what is happening. I liked it.

The title gripped me...

...And the story did not disappoint. It was very realistic and so detailed I could paint a full mental image of the scene. Loved it, faved.

Excellent Story

I enjoyed it.

Very nice.

Awaiting your next story.

good job

i agree with the others. well done. welcome to this site. i hope you give us a follow-up story. i won't give any suggestions. you will know where to go with this and you will do a good job taking us with you. as to the commentator who gets upset with subjects he thinks are "unrealistic," i would say that fiction by definition is unrealistic. it's how you do it that counts, and you do a very good job painting the picture you want us to see.

A nice first story

The story is believable and erotic, but I would have liked for him to fuck his mother a lot more.

Perhaps in another chapter he will get to enjoy his mother's pussy more.

I like that you are a couple, and write erotic stories, I can only hope that it has a good effect on your bed time activities. Sharing each others fantasizes would be really hot...

Thanks for the read.

Decent

Pretty good for a first attempt. Thanks for taking the time to write it for us

Thank you very much for your support.

I appreciate all your comments and I will keep writing. I decided to start writing on Literotica because of my girlfriend. Sometimes, I would email her erotic stories while she is at work, to get her in the mood before she comes home. We both like taboo stories, but she insisted I write my own. In real life, when we roleplay, we do not really go into details, and I feel embarassed to say some things out loud, so she wanted me to write about them. When she read this one at work, she got so aroused that she actually had to get off at work itself.

Fun story

Some very real stuff and good descriptions. good job

Can't Believe The Comments

Is everybody here now sub-literate? This thing is UNREADABLE!

Try resubmitting it in English.

In what way is it 'unreadable'?

Or should I say illegible? Sorry if my English is not as good as yours.

Very enjoyable

Enjoyed your story very much especially the build up to the, er, climax. It felt realistic. No 9" dick and hot, 37 y/o mom with DD's. Keep writing

My feedback

Enjoyed the story, would like a follow up.

screw the haters

I loved your tale and I have seen hundreds of stories this year so I would say your story is great for a short story and make me want to see a second addition to it and also your story far from "unreadible"

unreadable?

Great story! Only an idiot would! think it is unreadable

loved it

Had my dick so hard would love more

an excellent story, but...

it should have been her boy who made her pregnant, stuck his big prick up his mother's cunt and unloaded his young balls where his hot sperm belongs.

you are lucky

i wish i could do that

i wish that if i were there to fuck her

so good!

made me cum so hard ,I wanted to do the same thing buy with my aunt, I got close once but you are so lucky

Excellent story

Really loved it

Great story

i tried same as u with my wife's mother. finally she got pregnant before my wife. now i have two kids. 1 from my wife, another one from my wife's mother.

Love this

It sounds like he is the man she needs. He doesn't care that she doesn't wear Victoria's Secret to bed or wear $200.00 panties from France. She's beautiful to him and unlike many teenage sons (evidently the father too) doesn't mind shareing a room with his pregnant Mother. I slept with my Mother for the first time on a vacation. She took me on a trip (dad had to work) mainly to break it to me that they were breaking up. At one point I held her close and told her,"you don't need him anymore - I'm your man now". I was a minor, but I took dad's place that night and got a job when not in school. I learned to take on a man's role in the home - I can now do car repair, home maintainance, lots of stuff. I wanted to be the man she needed, just as this young man seems to be the best man for this mom. We've been together for a good many years now, and I can tell you that no one can love a woman like her son can. Because he, literally, always has.

Another hot night finally had us in bed together again!

My mother wasn't wearing any panties again, and her nightgown was very short, and thin. After a short while, my mother's breathing became faster, and I realized she was masturbating. I again freed my cock from my boxers, pushing it against my mom's ass. I reached around cupping her breast in my hand as I began to lightly fondle it, again pinching her nipple. I could hear her breathing getting ragged, then I felt her body shaking slightly as she reached her orgasm. The next thing I knew, she rolled over on top of me, smiling down at me in the moonlight. She then leaned back, and removed her nightgown, tossing it to the side. There my mother was, sitting on me completely naked, her hairy pussy, her dark areolas, nipples sticking out proudly, for my viewing. She raised up, guiding my cock to her vaginal opening. As soon as I felt her pussy lips touch my cockhead, she lowered herself down until I was completely inside her, letting out a moan when she did. She began moving her legs just enough to cause her to raise up, and down, on my cock a couple of inches. She looked down at me with a grin, grabbing my hands pulling them to her breasts. I began to fondle her nice tits, tweaking her nipples while she rode my cock faster. My mom began moaning, and my eyes began moving up to her facial expressions growing more, and more, intense with desire. I couldn't believe it, I was actually fucking my mother, and I didn't need to worry about cumming inside her, she was already pregnant!