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Mass Effect 3: Meeting Miranda

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/15/12

This is a petty gripe ...especially in light of how good the rest of the story is but...you've obviously never used Miri to do the biotic shield ... her control isn't quite as good as your excellent tale would lead one to believe.

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by mdb91304/15/12

Surprisingly good.

I normally don't like fan fiction, but honestly, this isn't bad at all.

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by Anonymous04/17/12

Can't wait for a sequel

I thought it was a great story. The Biotic stuff is fine, to me, as it is a video game. Can't wait for part two with Liara!

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by Anonymous04/24/12

Oh my god absolutley love thins thank-you!!!!

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