All Comments on 'Charity Begins at Home'

Really?

I would have thought that he would be more likely to be "proud"!!

my little brain took over while reading and I failed to notice his manhood was 'broad' or what! great hot story... too bad the other anonymous seems to have burned out his little brain.. hahahaha

Hey, give a girl a break, bloody spell check! Proud, he was bloody proud!

The bastards never did sign up!

Would it not be more erotic and exciting without the crude terminology? I think so. Subtle, erotic; gentle...no need for the crude expressions. Eroticism gets lost in the crude language.

Very exciting, though maybe a bit predictible. You could follow up with a Ch2 with Kim saying she needed a job so signened on with an adult store to demonstrate and sell sexy clothing & toys for women or mixed groups.--- etc.

Really enjoyed reading this story. Many thanks.

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I mead more im hot mead to go mmmmmmm loveleann xxxxxx