Allyson Ch. 07

Great ending and Great story man! You have got to finish Love in the Cross Hairs tho. I am really digging that one.

Excellent story

Titlle says it all

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Is that the end? Cannot be. What is the story with the doctor and the new nurses? Any connection with Allyson and him? You are very good at this writing thing. Wish I had the talent. Please keep it coming.

Touching and Moving.

Carvoli,

You've written a small masterpiece. I was completely taken off-guard by the growth of the characters, (their coming out of their shell so to speak), and the developments in the plot and lovely little twists and reversals in their fortunes.

There were an element or two that were slightly cheesy at the end but yet....I've rarely been moved in the way I have and had teary eyes, on more than one occasion, as I read this. (I'm a guy LOL)

Your command of all elements in making a story is perfect.

I rate this story a 5 on 5 and have selected you as one of my favorite authors.

One of the best stories on this board

Awesome

Hands down the best story I have ever read on Lit. It was like a book you start reading and put everything else aside to finish. Awaiting future chapters with bated breath. Thank you

Wonderful!

What a wonderful story. It had this old guy leaking tears and blubbering like a baby more than once.

Thanks

Thanks for another great story.