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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/11/12

Proof read, there are lots of mistakes in this

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by PoissonSurLaLune04/11/12

Really cute concept

Loved the concept and the level of detail, it's a great little quickie story. There are a few technical issues, and running it past a volunteer editor would have made it all the better. But it's really good, and thanks for sharing.

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by tazz31704/13/12

A GIRLS, GOTTA DO

what ever it takes to arouse. TK U MLJ LV NV

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