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Please fax this to the Vatican !!! or the Dalai Lama
& wait for the ensuing Fireworks !! Perhaps Dan Brown will appreciate this poem but it is Blasphemous 100 % . like the Danish cartoons of the Prophet .
i do wish Lord Jesus' s Cruxifiction & His disciple Magdalena or Lord Gautam Buddha were not Satirized in this fashion just because today is Easter !! sorry Oneira but could not agree with your sentiments here ;
Reply to Ashesh9
Yes, it may have not been the best time to post this one. However, this is one of the few poems I did not have the sense of writing, but rather a feeling of somehow channeling it from the Beyond. I did not put together the connection with Easter until I submitted it. Thus, perhaps it is a holiday message from the Big Guy Himself. Sorry if I offended anyone.
TO BE ABSOLVED
forgiven and forlorn, TK U MLJ LV NV
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was mentioned in New Poems Recommendations on the poetry forum.
hints of the Twilight inspired Vampiric counter-culture ??
i may have missed the import of your poem earlier : she actually sucks Life out of the Savior to save Him the long-stretched -out agony on the Cross from 9 a.m. to 3p.m. ?? ?
would He have allowed it ? would all the Sinners saved by the Sacrifice be still Saved from eternal Damnation if the Saviour pre-phoned His "It is accomplished . Father I commend my Spirit into Thy Hands !" ??
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