All Comments on 'The Next Level'

Where from here? We will see... Many options.

i loved it.

What tripe.

Well, there are some advances, but it is getting old. Paragraph by paragraph, it is still hot and interesting. story-wise, however, it is essentially in almost in the same place it was!

May I congratulate you on a sexually highly charged story, which maintained a mutually agreed, although somewhat dubious sexual boundary, thus displaying a perceived respect for the individuals and their relationships,rare in stories today. I trust you have a idea up you sleeve how to continue (or not) without devaluing your work so far. Thank you

Next level? Same o, same o.... Nothin' but tease.

I missed this chapter by accident and read Jade’s Weekend Away first.

The whole thing is over the top now, in this section Paul says he wouldn’t want to whore his wife out but other stuff between us four is ok, then he treats his mate’s girlfriend exactly like a whore.

I was enjoying the series until Jade’s Weekend Away which spiralled out of control. Still I can see why Jade didn’t react in a normal way when treated like shit because she went there in this chapter.

Maybe this should be renamed:- How to break trust and fuck up a relationship and friendship in a few simple steps