The Contest

please author

can you kill your self?
this is just fucking terrible... it is irrational inchoherent babble

Interesting

Ignore thay asshole. I thot it was good. I dont like anal, nut everuthing Uuuuuelse abouy it was good

The dickhead wins again

Fuck Off

Stupid!

What a fucking stupid story! No redeeming qualities.

I liked it

I liked hearing the thoughts running through her mind. This guy obviously has been waiting a long time to master her. She has resisted him for so long that he has been dying to get in her panties. She doesn't yet realize the power she has over him.

I am not a fan of the spitting in the face, but that is just my own sexual preference.

It was hot that she was getting fucked in front of her friends. I wish her gf would leave and Jack would shove his dick in her mouth

Great Story!

This story is well written. The main character had a choice of stopping, instead she continued to take the abuse and ended up reluctantly enjoying it. That is the whole point of the "Non-consent / Reluctance" category. For those that don't like the subject or the way the story unfolded, peruse a different category. Kudos for an original & also a bit twisted plot. Hopefully more stories or further chapters are down the road from this author. Thank you for your contribution.

fucking annoying

I will admit Rick is fucking annoying as hell, and he does not deserve to be in the presence of Sara, but this is a nice story. I was hoping that you give Sara a little more backbone, and tell this fucker to fuck off, but hopefully in the next chapter you will do so. That's if you will ever do a second chapter.

If you don't want to read it, don't open the link - this is a place of fantasy. Like her refusal to give in and his intention to exploit it, hope he can go further before he gets what's coming.

A note from the author

Wow. I'm kinda amazed at how strongly people seem to feel about this story. It seems that some people really like it, and a bunch of people really, really hate it.

To the people that like it: thank you for your kind words. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and I've decided to continue this story. I've currently written two more chapters, in fact -- though I won't comment as to whether or not the protagonist gets her revenge at this point.

To the people that hate it: I'd like to apologize to you, but I suspect you'd see through it and realize that I'm not sorry in the slightest. Seriously, not even a little. If you don't like what I write, feel free to not read it. Better yet, read it and leave angry notes about how much you hate it. Your impotent rage fuels me, and makes me giggle. Really, it's quite awesome.

To Harryin VA, your constructive feedback touched me so much that I've decided to write you into a future chapter. As I don't know much about you, I've decided that your character will have no discernible genitals, reduced intellect and poor bowel control -- mirroring the image I have of you in my head. Sadly, as I've no interest in writing scat port, this will limit your character to comic relief. I do hope that's okay.

I've no idea how 'arry managed to get out of our category - bit of confusion there.He is knocking on a bit.

I'll take the old cunt gently by the elbow back to Loving Wives. Gawd knows what he thought he was commenting on let's hope he hasn't been too upset by what he's seen.

HarryinVa

Wow. I'm not much for swinging and cheating stories - an old married prude I guess. But I did enjoy your response to HarryinVa. You have spunk (the old original definition of the word, not the more modern scatalogical definiton).

basically a rape stockholm syndrome i'm an idiot story

the guy in this story committed rape, the girl whose ego prevented her from telling the truth and getting out of the situation contributed to it. Her two friends in setting her up this way were the cause of it. She should calmly walk over to her purse take out her 38 can calmly blow all three of them away then call the police and tell them she just killed her rapist. That would be real domination.

Another note from the author

Okay, now I'm just confused. Has my submission somehow bled out into a different category than the one that I submitted it to? I meant for this to go in NonConsent/Reluctance, if it's somehow wound up elsewhere I do sincerely apologize.

If, however, it's only in the category that I submitted it to, I really have to wonder why some people are getting this angry. Yes, it describes something that would absolutely be considered rape if it were to occur in real life -- as does pretty much every single story in this category. Fortunately, it's a work of pure fiction. None of the characters need fear psychological or physical damage, as none of them exist. Except for the Harryin VA character who will appear in later chapters, known for jumping out and random times and spouting off his catch phrase of "I pooped my pants!". That dude is totally real.

I guess what I'm saying is, why are you reading stories in this category if you're uncomfortable with the category itself? You don't see me going over to Incest/Taboo and whining about how sex between family members is totally wrong, Exhibitionist & Voyeur to bitch about how peeping tom laws exist for a reason, et cetera. Seriously, if you can't handle stories where consent is murky, why on Earth are you here?

Concept makes no sense

If I understand this right, the point of the contest is that she has to let him do whatever he wants to her or admit defeat. If she admits defeat, he gets to do whatever he wants to her. Either way, she loses, has no pride and she's too stupid to have picked that up from the start? I think I understand the anger streak in some of the comments here. It's not just a standard NonCon story, it's a man raping a mentally handicapped person, and the handicap's friends set her up for it.

Fail

Your storyline makes no sense

Wasn't that bad.

I liked the story, I like your writing, but it really does not make any sense.
She lets him fuck her in the ass, because she doesnt' want to admit she is weaker than him?

Sexy story nevertheless.

Well played

I was attracted to this story by the description and the number of comments. When I checked the score, I expected to hate it. Fortunately, that was not the case. I like the concept, I like the characters, and I commend you on the execution. The dialogue is first rate, and the reactions of the supporting characters are plausible. The clash of wills that is at the center of the story is pulled off expertly. Oh, and the sex is hot, too.

My only issue is I can't imagine how the two managed to discuss the situation without being overheard. Other than that, it was excellent.

And that leaves one more point: why do some readers find it necessary to open stories they know they will find offensive? What's the point?

CORRECT CATEGORY...

Interesting and unique premise, perfect caracters and well written!

More

Left a few convenient loose ends in this story. The fact Kate had previously got together with Rick and that Jack was obviously waiting for his turn.

Look forward to the next instalments. It is after all fantasy and the premise whilst in life would have ended a lot sooner in Erotic fiction is bang on for some good sex.

Loved a lot of it

other than him spitting in her face this was really hot =) I love the mind games involved along with everything else.

This is one of the hottest stories I've read, even if there were parts that I definitely didn't enjoy (the humiliation aspect as well as the spitting) - but heck, to each their own. The clash of their wills, the creativity of Rick's mind and just his basic determined character was enough for me to easily ignore whatever I didn't like - and that says a lot! I think he was a mean bastard but he didn't give her anything she couldn't take and her life will definitely be more exciting onwards. I hope she doesn't lose her will to resist and doesn't meekly accept whatever's thrown her way though! Either way, thanks for writing this well-developed, strong and just damn sexy non-consent story without apologies ;)

Rick Is Dead Meat!

She grabbed a butcher's knife and sliced off his cock at the root! Die Ass-wad!

It's CALLED RAPE, DUDE!

Whose friends are they? Ricks or Kates? They didn't help at all.

RAPE!!!

What kind of fucking friends does she have? The kind that goes in for RAPE! Lose the friends, get the cops, prosecute all of them. The pervert that did the act, the supposed friends that did nothing.