All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 01'

Please continue ... I am a captivated ...

Yes, please do continue. I could do without the M/F sex (though I know it was needed to show what a jerk he is), but I can't wait to see what happens between Cara and Hailey. ~ L

I read your story (Choices Ch. 1), and I must say you have left me on the edge of my seat. I cannot wait to read the rest. Thank you so much for writing such a lovely, well-written story.

Omg ! That was truly amazing, you have to write more. Cara do deserve more.

I love it so can't wait to find out what happens!

please post more soon

I would love more as soon as possible. You've made such a wonderful start.

what a great start - Hailey is awesome!

I can't wait for what you have in store for these two. Very good start can't wait to read more of these two

i absolutely loved it! please post more soon. im your biggest fan

I told you that you would do WONDERFUL. These are amazing and well this story have the same affect on me the very first one you told me does. So keep up the good work.

your a very talented writer. I have read everything you posted and am looking forward to whats to come

I love the seduction. nice! more!!

Good read,

Excellent story = so very well written. 5 stars I loved it