All Comments on 'Babes in the Woods'

there is an easy flow to your story - i really like that

nice maybe a little more foreplay though

WOW - nice story and you got me so aroused, I got very hard - lol. Please write more about what they do during their camping trip. Thanks :)

mmm got my juices flowing, really hope there is more to cum :-)

the dialogue flowed very nicely. these two felt like real best friends, rather than lesbian props. well done.

Loved it. I can honestly say I'm pretty wet. Well done.

That was beautiful.

Great story, I loved it. Thanks for writing.

I am finding someone to make this my first experience with! Good work, thank you

I love the outdoors, and you just gave me another reason to.

Great story.

The second paragraph is terrible, representative of the story's general sloppiness. "Remind me why we're doing this again" should have been edited to read: "Remind me why were doing this, again?" If you think there's no difference, this piece, written by a male, may be perfect for you.

I was impressed by her brassiere-- it's usually hard to find one that has a clasp that can migrate from the front to the back, then return to its original position between the breasts in the space of a single paragraph.

Do you read your own work much?

Last comment was a bit mean I quite enjoyed the story and didn't notice the error mentioned.

i dont like dildos lmao. idk why i had to say that

Loved it straight to the point racey

Yep, my pussy couldnt be any more wet than it is right now