My Loving Wife Ch. 2

A real cumslut/whore

OK, where IS the revenge? He's still plotting? Would like to see a good revenge story. Hope he gets the proof he needs.
I hope there is some sort of revenge for some of her "friends", too.

Get your hand off it Nightowl

Read the title... chapter 2.

Doesn't mean the author has to make your cock throb with each chapter!!!

I thought it was great!!!!!

Grow a dick and use the toothpick to get the gunk out of your teeth.

damonX, unfortunately, this site is rife with losers like this.

I love your story.

To Get your Hand Off

You thought it was great? That's because you're SICK!

I want some heads broken and nuts mashed.

patiently waiting

I am waiting for the revenge. I hope it is sufficiently vicious enough to punish her and all her friends. I also hope he manages to put his life into some sort of order as a reward for putting up with her.

Horny in NE

great story. pick it up and finish it someday. Soon!!!

Maritial Dischord!

So - the guy goes to a Strip Club to watch the girls dance. After watching several girls strut their stuff, he gets the suprise of his life when his wife comes strutting out and proceeds to entertain the rowdy crowd. Things start getting out of hand pretty quickly. This story has generated quite a lot of differences of opinion - and - you don't need mine.

fINISH

Why do you authors leave a person hanging? Finish the story for God's sake. You must be a pervert to dangle a story like this without finishing.

revenge is needed

let him investigate where her whoring money goes to, let him get it and humiliate her by making her whoring known to her parents, relatives and friends, post it on the internet, make her watch him fucking the other dancers and then kick her out.

unfinished business

I give up waiting. Guess we will have to imagine our own ending after more than 5 years. The writing was good and fluent though. Told the author, if he writes some ending, to make it a good one. She deserves his revenge for her whoring. G.Belgium

waiting for chapter 3

waiting for the next chapter. I want to see the final chapter where he gets his revenge. sells her videos to a website, sends links to her friends and family, divorces her while his lawyers find her money so that he comes out ahead financialy. she must be stashing lots with tips etc. hell, it'd be great if she ended up paying alimony!

Sorry.

I've been getting a lot of comments and questions about the next part of this story. I will not be writing a new chapter. I wrote this story when I was a teenager over 10 years ago and lost interest in it long ago. The writing style in this story is quite immature and would not meld well with my current style. I apologize to any readers still waiting but I have absolutely no interest in addding more chaters.

Damon

how sick this attempt is.

i will remember this author and never read any of his future rambling.

Well?

It's only been eight fucking years, when are you going to finish it??????????????????

Thanks for not finishing this crap

From the beginning it's cliche and dumb. No man would walk away to find out more. What more is there a cheating slut is a cheating slut, you dump her ass out the door and get a newer cleaner one.

RVENGE!!!

When will you finish this "sad" tale and let Hubby get Revenge on Wife and Her Lovers.

Unfortunately damonx seems to still be writing.

One would think that an anal fetish, combined with humiliation of females would get old after awhile; say two weeks.
Guess not. Say a lot about the author and his emotional maturity.

wonder when

his revenge on his loving wife is coming?

Ending?

Where the hell is the ending? What a bulkshit way to write a story!

The Ending?

Hope to see the end to this soon.

AFTER FINDING WHAT YOU SEEKED

the plan should be to save your own ass. TK U MLJ LV NV

loser

Wow the husband is a loser if he had no idea she was a lying cheating cunt of this magnitude. Well written story. Hope he gets her good. Hope she suffers lots of pain

Awesome

One of my all time favorite stories on Literotica! This is the kind of filth I love to read!

Somehow I expected this story to continue.

Poor..very poor

Husband a wimp, watching his wife getting taken for so long without any objection,
wife seems to be blind cause in all that time she didn´t see her husband...
and to top it all: An (let´s call him) "author" who abandons his readers and leaves his story without ending. Depressing..

WHAT???

This is it? It can't be. It needs to be finished.

I agree with EGOTRIX .....

I can understand its authors privilege to end the story where they want, but not this one. I gave it a score of 1 because of the wimp husband and outrageous end of the story, however depending if the story picks up again, it could go to a 5 if the husband grows some balls!

Finish it

This is not up to par with your other works because it is clearly unfinished. Your title suggests that something is up with them, but you never develop the characters so it is impossible to really undersand the story. Instead, it is presented as a series of sexually deviant acts. There is a lot of action, but we have no idea of the quality of rhe relationship between husband and wife, what he motivation was, and what made her become so nasty. Right now you have a husband who is surprised by his wife's nasty nymphomania contemplating revenge, but nothing to give us an indication of how big a betrayal this is, and his part in it. If this was just meant as a stroke story, you didn't have to imply that the hubbie would do anything.

what happens next?

I really like this story but there are too many of these on here that just never finish. The guy finds out his wife is cheating on him (or in this case is a huge cumdump), and it always ends with him knowing he has to do something or take revenge....but that part never comes out. I would really like to read the conclusion of what he does, because the revenge is the best part of the whole story.

Maybe "Finish the Damn Story" can do this one...

Since it was written 12 years ago. If he does I would like her to get a jail sentence if possible. If the husband just dumps her, the ways the laws are in some states he could end up paying her alimony for the rest of her life.

Revenge

The story has still not ended...still to go...where is the planned revenge ???

2 *....

2 * only because the story ended here...No revenge, no nothing...

A TWO-WAY SUPRISE

and a not so happy future. TK U MLJ LV NV

Yuck

Awful. 1 *

Agree

Would like someone like "Finish the Damned Story" to complete this story. A lot of good material to work with left unused. I wondered if anything was "off" before they got married, or if he was just oblivious and missed it. Would be interesting to know the "Why" and for "How Long" that this has been going on.
This sounds like one of those stories portrayed on "Who the hell (or in this case) What did I marry". I personally, after the trip to the club, wouldn't have cared; I would have wanted to have gotten as far away from her as I could. But, to each his own I guess.

right

I think that's it's so fucking moronic for some wannabe author who writes a story with out a FUCKING ENDING if you don't have an ending then don't write the damn story until you do.

good story

if your into all that stuff. I cant see the purpose of the story, regardless of what she did, she is cheating, and making him a cuckold, maybe he is into that, who knows. this much is certain, he cant touch her again, and get tested for STD. if he doesn't get proof he will be paying alimony. there is hardly any emotion in this story, no drama, nothing to drive it. if he loved her, how could he watch all that?

No story

Where is the story line? Why describe something that can be seen in any porn movie? DEH

What happened to the rest of the

story?

the rest?

This has been abandoned for 13 years.

The writer posted other stories for eight years after leaving this as it is now.

Truly a shame that FTDS is MIA (or is it AWOL?)

Bio says author is straight

We all know he's a fucking fag. My calling him an author was an insult to all writers and I humbly apologize.

More

Start to End

Has a chance!!

Then the story ends....as so many do in Literotica like a big pile of shit!! What the fuck...he is seeking revenge ...well what the fuck does he do?...why even post this kind of shitty story with no ending...does Literotica have nobody reading this stuff before they allow it to be read...I guess not!! Just another waste of time...so I say Fuck You DamonX!!

What a ass hole of a story

A sick diseased whore.

SO DAMN STUPID STORY

tHIS IS ONE OF THE MOST WORTHLESS STORIES I HAVE TRYING TO READ. tHERE WAS NO i MEAN NO STORY.