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by Cinner07/03/13

Brilliant!

This is one of the more difficult genres to do and you have done it brilliantly, Jett! The truth is that as horrifying as She's actions were I could still see some of your brand of dry humour in the writing.

Five stars from me!

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by Cinner07/03/13

After a second read...

I have looked at this again. This is seriously good characterisation; one understands She even while feeling sympathy for Brad and Charlie. For me, the tear welling up in Brad's remaining eye, Charlie fear, his examination of his own mouth, and the police cluelessness were all poignant and priceless. As an animal rights supporter, I can relate to She as well even though she is not warm and fuzzy, and that shows seriously good writing. Comparing her to the beautiful big cats on one hand, and the truly terrifying shark on the other, gave the perfect analogy of attractiveness and danger! Brilliant work here!

I'm off to read something else from your collection.

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