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Love in the Air

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by Anonymous

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by Artofromance04/16/12

Very Sweet!

Title of my comment says it all. Well done!

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by JonTaylor04/16/12

Wait...what?

It's like reading a book that has pages torn out of the middle. Nice story til then though.

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by Anonymous04/16/12

There are a lot of holes and it felt rushed.

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by Anonymous04/16/12

Yawn

Poor

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by ByronBrandt12/29/12

It did feel a bit rushed, but was quite enjoyable just the same.

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by PrincessLeeLee07/02/14

Nice but...

Just skipped randomly ahead... Even adding "epilogue" would have made the ending better... Nice story overall, though

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