All Comments on 'A New Eden'

by Emeraldfae

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More please!

OMG do please add more chapters. Love it so far...

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickialmost 12 years ago
rare

It's rare to find a good demon story on this site. I like it, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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I like the story so far but i hope she dosnt turn out to be one of those always shy about everything and if she fights back never is actual strong enough and is a week and helpless girl their are to many storys like that but i do like your wrightings

EmeraldfaeEmeraldfaealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the comments and votes everyone! The next chapter should be out next week at the latest and should be longer. Apparently 10 pages of 12 type Is not enough for 2 pages!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Start!

Wow, this was a really great start to this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow

Another ripper!

MizTMizTalmost 12 years ago
Nice Start

I just found this and I can't wait to read chapter 2. Well actually I don't have to because it posted today!!!

Tio_NarratoreTio_Narratorealmost 12 years ago
Nice Start

A very interesting beginning, with the promise of a tale that will wander from the usual demon/maiden/saviour trope. A bit of mechanical editing is needed.

Keep up the story-telling, Ms. Fae.

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