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by ap2tech04/21/12

Unique

No sex but oddly compelling. It makes me wonder if there's something else to be told. Who is Veronica? How did she come to be? This story begs for more info, especially background on Veronica. I would appreciate a follow up please.

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by Anonymous04/23/12

dammit

oh my god you can't just end it like that. i'm hoping there's at least more stories set in this universe because this NEEDS to continue

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