All Comments on 'Cumming of Age Ch. 10'

Please write more of this story. I was completely mesmerized

by it. I have stayed aroused the entire time I was reading it.

Why stop now, or are you running out of ideas? Keep the general theme going and expand in different directions. Excellent style and prose and a good story line that needs to be moved on.

even though youve been gone so long, youre still one of the best writers on here. come back!

Please continue--one of the very best series ever.

You can't stop now

You can't stop now

You can't stop now

What about Katrina?????

Hottest fucking stories I've read, luv to have anything like that happen.

I loved it great story would like to see bobby get together with katrina on her day off keep up the good work.

Outstanding! One of the best stories I've read!

need more great story.

i know you havnt written for awhile but u must continue this story and atleast end it

Outstandinng work. I can tell you must be English or of English descent. I spent 3 lovely years in your country and screwed my brains out continiously but most of all I remeber a lady who wanted to eat my johnson andI screwed up big time. By not letting her LizabethKing of Norwich she was the most fantastic woman I have had in my life. I was married to a woman who had a strangle hold on my life so when she arrived in the UK I had to let Liz go and I have regretted it ever since.

What great memorys of screwing on the bus from Mildenhall to Norwich. What a fantastic country.

Heavenly memories.

Jack

Looking forward to more, with great expectations!

You've got to give us more. Katrina needs some cock and pussy. Maybe a big dicked butler and her are watching?

Please write moor and soon. This is one great story

You've left us at a critical climax. What say you get 'er done.

PLEASE write more! Your writing makes my lonely life in an all girls school SO much more bearable. Just thinking about Bobbie's huge cock makes my day better. please keep going!

Absolutely thrilling, I can hardly wait for you to continue, do not finnish it too soon..

Hey complete the fucking thing we are waiting and as horny as ever

This is a great story, you absolutely have to continue with it, especially as you have set up the safeway lady so well and even arranged a meeting with the maid . . .

It's a must :-)

good story keep it coming

I love it~~ keep up the teail~ Hmmmm thanks for sharing

David

Please continue this story . I Love it :)

Damn that was hot! love it.

wow and fuck,

anyway i am a man with a normal dick, I love the way the women in your story like to swallow cum. In this part 10, you introduced tiny katherina.... would like to read a big story when both having fun together

really hot, great characters, great hot sex, keep it writing, if i could get my wife to act like the women in your story, i would never leave home.

love it keep it cumming

Absolutely, positively, without a doubt more.

(please)

I see you haven't finished this story yet what is keeping you my cock is so hard please finish it and also write a story about Katrina tool. Very hot story

You went a little over the top but what the hell it's a fantasy. Finish this line up and the Tuesday with the LP Katrina. Perhaps a conclusion that he and Linda are still doing great after so many years together. Great stuff keep up the good work. Thanks

u gotta finish up with something with her

No, really. Dude.

This has been a great series, but you stopped too soon! More - M O R E !!

I hope this gets continued~

keep cumming with this story and one about the maid

This story has been great. I am disappointed to see that you haven't continued it. I greatly enjoy it, and would love to see several more chapters published soon!

it was great please continue with the serious I'm sure you got lots more ideas. Ur defenitely a great writter.

Seriously. Excellent story, but you need to continue, it's far too well done for you leave it a cliff hanger.

I'd love to read more, with a potential spin off with the maid.

cum cum cum on

More please. Linda and the maid would be awesome.

this was grate. I even came with out toughing myself just by reading this. I want to do that again. you have to go on with this

Let us see how much the little Katrina. can take in each love holle. And soon, please.

And soon please! I

I need Chapter 11!!!! Can't leave me hanging I want to know if he fucks her, I want to know if he marries Linda. I want to know if he does Katrina. To many open ends, please post it soon.

a lot more chapters.

"Geeze, most of the time my face looks like a glazed donut."

Literotica at its finest.

Does he get Katrina? Marry Linda? Goes bach to Starbuck? Want more.

I just found this series. It is highly enjoyable. I just wish there were more.

Can't watt see how you tie all your loose ends together...katrina and themoviedate,his high school class Mateo trot his horse cock etc etc et al

You have created so many avenues for further adventures and teased us with so much to expect that we will all be disappointed and frustrated if there is no real end. You are far too experienced and capable a writer to let us down........

I've got to see more of Katrina! I had a girl like that in college. We did an act where I held her as if she were my puppet. But instead of my hand in her back, it'd be under her playing with her little ass and kitty. I felt a little twisted when I fucked her, she was so tiny. She had to have clothes made for her, but she bought and wore 'hello kitty' and 'wonder woman' panties. Walking around campus she'd use a pok'e'man backpack and look like a 5th grade kid at a major university. She had trouble getting 'normal' people for dates as many were just perving on her size. She liked women too, but because of her size doing a 69 just didn't work. Being on top of me meant she nearly had to do the splits with her short little legs and little hips and doing her from behind was, though not impossible, an exercise in problem solving. So many things made our life interesting. I didn't treat her like a mutant and she took no shit, nor did she take prisoners. She had to leave, arranged marriage, and went back to Italy. I have a fairly petite pecker at 5 1/2'' but it looked Huge going in and out of her and I hope nobody has hurt her over the years. I know kids weren't an option. I guess I just have a thing for small women because my wife is 4'6" and we get funny looks too. At Six Flags she wore a My Little Pony t shirt, plaid skirt, knee socks, and 'lite-up' children's tennis shoes. It was funny, and I got nasty looks when I'd feel her up like I was a child molester. Yes, I need more Katrina.

i ike it, plelrase more chapter

I LIKE YOUR WRITING VERY MUCH. I WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE CH. AND THEM BRING IT TO A REAL HAPPY ENDING.

Hell yeah I want read to more, especially when he gets to plug her pussy and ass. And let's not forget about Katrina. More, more more. Damn good writing, got me horny as fuck...................lol

Chapter 11 Please.

Wonderful writing! Thuroughly enjoyed this story. Had my precum flowing!

Realism is what makes a peson aroused. A story about women with giant tits and a guy with huge swollen balls just doesn't cut it. The storyline itself is amusing.

He "feels like a Cretin while speaking to Katrina". That's because he is! Chapter two where Bobby has an actual date with Katrina to improve their relationship, which leads to a sexual encounter could make an excellent second chapter to this story. Of coarse he would bring along his younger female friend (with the big tits who also enjoys female's as well).

Wonderful excellent story would like to read more of it thank you 5 stars

A well written erotic story. Well worth the read and I hope that many more chapters will follow.

Please more as you have time. Love your tale very much, Indeed.

Yeah you got a great story line going. I was hoping to see starbucks back in there but the little girlfriend thing was genius. You have to continue this just don't jump the shark. I also have to wonder about the future of the two where do they go when both Moms let them know its a good thing to be together?

More

Was this story ever finished ? Was really good story up until it left a lot of holes to feel in (pun intended) to bad had the makings of five ended with zero

More please

I really enjoyed this story. Please continue.

Zero stars for not finishing. A waste of my time

Outrageous, I love it. Lol. Yes, more!