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by LexiRoseLexi04/17/12

I really liked the story but the way you split up the sentences to emphasise certain parts took away from the flow somehow and I found myself losing interest towards the end.

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by Lickideesplit11/22/12

Should be required reading for all 15 yo boys!

Lots of planning just to get a guy, and we are just pushovers anyway!
Turns out this series is continued in another (LW) category, anyway. I hate that! Keep subsequent chapters in the same category as the first one!

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