The End Of A Romance?

COMMITMENT ISSUES RUN HIGH

with the author and main character. TK U MLJ LV NV

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I would say that's a fair comment.

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed it xx

Romance? I fail to see it as romance, it would also help if you broke up the paragraphs more, also remember the difference between breath and breathe. You used the former when it should have been the latter.

People really live like this?

But my goodness you can write!

I don't think you could have painted a more lonely, miserable and exhausting picture. Occasionally sprinkled with a ray of sunshine here or there. This wasn't a romance, and I hesitate to call it an erotic coupling.

But jeeze you can write! When I grow up, I wanna be able to write like this...

You've really captured the feelings I imagine run through a cheaters mind, especially when theya re "the other woman".

WHEN ONE HALF OF A COUPLE

cant put %s on their part in a relationship. TK U MLJ LV NV